(We've already arrived.)
.
(I'm going to finish this work now.)
Note that luego, después and más tarde can be used interchangeably when describing a succession of events or giving instructions.
If we’re looking at where one thing is relative to another, we can use these transitional phrases:
/ | Here | (Let's go. There's no one here.) |
There | tienes. (There you go.) | |
/ | Over there | voy. (There I go.) |
/ | Outside | del banco. (I'm outside the bank.) |
Next to | un hermoso parque (My house is next to a beautiful park.) |
If we need some help in explaining something smoothly, we can use these words to provide context:
For example | : lápices, bolígrafos, cuadernos y papel. (We sell stationary, for example pencils, pens, notebooks and paper.) | |
That is to say, that is | , estoy muy cansado. (I've worked out for three hours, that is, I am very tired.) | |
Since | no había clientes, cerré la tienda. (Since there were no clients, I closed the shop.) | |
/ | Including | el amarillo y el naranja. (I like warm colors, including yellow and orange.) |
Since | tú no quieres ir. (I'm going alone, since you don't want to go.) | |
/ | Among others | . (There are many different fruits: apples, pears, grapes among others.) |
If you’ve made one statement, but have additional details to add, you can tack them on with these words:
And | me duele la cabeza. (I'm tired and I have a headache.) | |
In addition (to), furthermore, moreover, besides | me dijo que no tenía dinero. (In addition, he told me he didn't have any money.) | |
Also, as well, too | (I want the red one, too.) | |
Also, similarly, likewise, furthermore | , deberíamos llamar al cliente. (We need to finish the project. Also, we should call the client.) | |
Similarly, likewise, furthermore | , el contrato será firmado por todas las partes. (Likewise, the contract will be signed by all the parties.) | |
Similarly, likewise, by the same token | , todos los estudiantes deben aprobar el examen. (By the same token, all students must past the test.) | |
On the other hand, what's more | , todavía estamos esperando su respuesta. (What's more, we're still waiting for his answer.) | |
Moreover, on the other hand | , me gustaría volver a París. (On the other hand, I'd like to go back to Paris.) | |
Besides | , olvidé mi cartera. (We can stop by the house, besides, I forgot my wallet.) |
Just remember that y can only connect two words, phrases or sentences of the same category. This is called coordination, and y is a coordinating conjunction.
When referring to cause and effects, you can use these phrases to transition from one to the other:
As a result | , se mudó a Polonia. (As a result, he moved to Poland.) | |
As a consequence, accordingly | , desde ahora hablaremos solo en español. (Accordingly, we'll only speak Spanish from now on.) | |
As a consequence of | ello, no pude ver a mi hermano. (I arrived late and, as a consequence of that, I wasn't able to see my brother.) | |
/ / | Therefore, for this reason, that's why | llegué tarde. (I overslept, that's why I arrived late.) |
Therefore, thus | , debemos tomar medidas preventivas. (Therefore, we have to take preventive measures.) | |
Therefore, thus | , el resultado será publicado mañana. (Therefore, the result will be published tomorrow.) | |
For this reason | , las botellas de plástico están prohibidas. (For this reason, plastic bottles are forbidden.) | |
So | volvimos a casa. (The shop was closed, so we went back home.) | |
So, thus | pude aprobar el examen. (I studied a lot and thus I could pass the exam.) |
Using these transition words correctly will really strengthen whichever part of your phrase that you emphasize it with:
Particularly, especially, above all | para niños. (That's very dangerous, especially for children.) | |
Especially | en agosto. (We go to the beach very often, especially in August.) | |
Effectively, indeed, actually, really, truly | , los estudiantes nuevos no han venido. (Indeed, the new students haven't come.) | |
Effectively, indeed, actually, really, truly | te ves cansado. (You really look tired.) | |
In fact, indeed, as a matter of fact | , nunca he estado allí. (It wasn't me. In fact, I've never been there.) | |
Especially, particularly, mainly | para exportar. (We use them mainly for export.) | |
Indeed | creo que deberías decirle. (Indeed, I think you should tell her.) |
Comparing and contrasting requires lots of transition words in order to flow and make sense:
Like | una vaca. (She's strong like a cow.) | |
Conversely, vice-versa | (He takes care of her and vice-versa.) | |
But | lo compraré. (I don't need it, but I'll buy it.) | |
But | tres. (There weren't two but three.) | |
Although, while, even though, even if | llueva. (We'll go even if it rains.) | |
However, nevertheless, notwithstanding | , no podemos estar juntos. (I love her. However, we can't be together.) | |
Still, even so, nevertheless | , fui a la fiesta. (I was very tired. Still, I went to the party.) | |
However, nevertheless | la semana pasada compró un coche nuevo. (He says he doesn't have any money. However, last week he bought a new car.) | |
Despite, in spite of | la lluvia, fuimos al zoo. (In spite of the rain, we went to the zoo.) | |
On the contrary | , nunca dijo la verdad. (On the contrary, he never told the truth.) | |
Contrary to, as opposed to | lo esperado, ganamos el partido. (Contrary to expectations, we won the match.) | |
By contrast, on the other hand | , cualquier violación del contrato será castigada. (On the other hand, any contract violation shall be punished.) |
Sometimes we need some help transitioning into a concluding statement, which is why these terms can come in handy:
In short, in a nutshell, in summary, in essence | , es uno de los mejores coches del mercado. (In essence, it's one of the best cars in the market.) | |
To sum up | veamos nuestras notas una vez más. (To sum up, we'll look at our notes one more time.) | |
In general | , podemos decir que la campaña no fue un éxito. (In general, we can say the campaign was not a success.) | |
After all, all in all | , seguimos juntos. (All in all, we're still together.) | |
In conclusion | este año ha sido muy bueno. (In conclusion, this has been a very good year.) |
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When I first started teaching AP Spanish, I panicked. How was I going to teach students how to write an argumentative essay for AP Spanish Language and Culture when I had never learned? (Or, if I HAD learned, that information was irretrievable from the depths of my brain.)
I went running to the English teachers at my school asking for direction. And they came through.
Using their templates and resources (I spent months reading books), I created PowerPoints and activities in Spanish to help my students succeed on the argumentative essay (previously called the persuasive essay). The curriculum took several years to perfect.
During this period of trial and error, I revised the lessons to further help students do their best writing. And they DID some excellent writing, organizing their essays, using transitions, and supporting their thesis statements. I was so proud of them!
A novice teacher mistake (Yes, I’m talking about myself!) is to assume students know the basics.
Many of them don’t. Teach each concept from the bottom up, one step at time. First, teach students how to write a sentence, then a paragraph. Don’t assume students know how to capitalize words at the beginning of the sentence and end with a period, or that they even know how to keep to one topic in a paragraph. (Stream of consciousness writing anyone? UGH!) Do several practices, then give them incorrect sentences and paragraphs and have them write correct ones.
Provide students with the vocabulary for expressing cause and effect, addressing opposing views, citing sources, introducing topics, expressing opposing viewpoints, and making comparisons. Teach them transition words and phrases as well as synonyms to prevent repetition of words. Give them lists of vocabulary that they can use as a reference as well as model essays using the vocabulary.
Before teaching students how to organize their essays, teach them how to write a thesis statement with three reasons and practice with them until they have mastered it. Show students model thesis statements.
Don’t move to the next step until students have thoroughly practiced and mastered the previous step. The most important step is the writing of the thesis statement. Once that is perfected, students are on their way to organizing their essays. And organization is KEY! I used to ask my students repeatedly, “What’s your point?”
Give students plenty of model thesis statements. Have them analyze good and bad “tesis con tres razones”. Then, in pairs, direct them to write their own. Choose exemplary thesis statements from student volunteers and show them to the class. Project sub-par statements from College Board examples and have them tell you how to improve them.
I spent a large chunk of my time correcting the organization of the essays as well as the writing. Students need to be organized in their thinking. Give them an outline template and tell them to write “un bosquejo” using the template . Here is the one I use.
It’s also helpful to provide students with a graphic organizer to help them plan.
Model how to include the requisite components of the intro paragraph: the hook, the thesis statement with three reasons (a strong opinion), some effects, and a conclusion or transition. And, of course, practice, practice, practice. Tell students to pair up and write an introductory paragraph.
Move on to paragraphs and teach them how to write topic sentences that correspond to the three reasons in the thesis. Teach the developing paragraphs separately. Have students peer edit using a checklist . If not possible, give samples of student work with no names or samples you have made up.
Model all the required elements of a concluding paragraph: propose a solution or action, address the opposing arguments, reaffirm the thesis, end with a strong statement.
Give students three paragraphs with no transitions and have them write connecting words or sentences.
After teaching students the components of each part of the essay, have them analyze a model essay and label the parts: 3 reasons, topic sentences, transitions, hook, topic sentence, evidence. (I divide the class up and use this activity as a competition.)
11. focus on the question..
Direct students to read and underline the question.
Have students read the written source and listen to the audio underlining and recording any information that answers the question.
Tell students to write a short title for each paragraph to help them thoroughly understand the written source. Occasionally, I had students write “una síntesis” and lift their white boards to show me what they had written.
For the audio texts, I had students practice pronouncing words using the pronunciation of the speaker’s particular region, for example: omitting the “s,” practicing the Castillian “z” and “c.” They also previewed and practiced the vocabulary they would encounter before reading or listening to the texts.
After reading and listening to the sources, students must make a decision: Yes, no, or both. They can’t be on the fence and they MUST not resort to summarizing the sources. Remind students to write THEIR opinion, not to begin with the sources. You will have to keep repeating this as students will initially summarize the sources instead of writing their own thesis statements. Ask them, “How can you use the sources to support YOUR thesis? Insist they use the sources ONLY to support their position. Show them several possible examples of thesis statements for each position, yes, no, or both.
Teach students how to use the third person instead of the first and second. Give them informal sentences with the first and second person and have them convert them to the third person, then do the reverse. These FORMAL ESSAY TASK CARDS help students practice.
15. give frequent feedback..
This is why so many teachers don’t want to teach AP Spanish. In order for students to improve their writing, they need frequent feedback, which, translated, means HOURS of daily correcting. No life. I’m serious. Tell your family members or significant others that, for a few months, you will be unavailable.
I corrected the essays the first time using codes . I modeled for them how to use the codes to correct their essays. I circled the errors and gave the papers back to students to correct using the codes. I actually corrected each essay twice, first for organization (Does it have an introduction, a thesis statement with three reasons, corresponding topic sentences, transitions, conclusion, supporting evidence…?) Then, I corrected for grammar, vocabulary, and fluency.
After the students turned in the revised versions, I corrected them twice again, for organization and grammar, this time writing in the corrections and giving them a grade. I staple their essays to the College Board Rubric , circling the areas on the rubric where they need to improve.
In the five years that I taught AP Spanish, only one of my students did not pass, so I know these strategies work. I believe they will work for your students also.
All of these tips and activities are included in my PowerPoints and Activities “ How to Write an Essay for Spanish Three and Four ” and “ El ensayo argumentativo .”
Teaching AP Spanish is rewarding, but also a time sucker. If you would rather not spend hours writing lesson plans in addition to correcting a mountain of essays and other assignments, use the ones I have created. Everything is done for you! All you have to do is teach, correct, and go home. Click on the link to see them. AP Spanish Lesson Plans and Curriculum for an Entire Year: Triángulo aprobado
AP Spanish Lesson Plans and Curriculum for an Entire Year: Vista Higher Learning and Temas
Here is the link to all the AP Spanish PowerPoints
If you would like to give your Spanish Four students a good foundation in expository essay writing, essential to success in writing an argumentative essay, click on the following link: How to Write an Essay in Spanish No-Prep Lesson Plans and Curriculum
I hope these strategies are helpful to you as you guide your students to mastery of the Argumentative Essay for AP Spanish.
In case you missed the other posts related to AP Spanish, here they are:
Three Tips for Teaching AP Spanish
What do I Teach After the AP Spanish Exam?
Why I teach AP Spanish the Way I Do
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This is SO helpful, Angie. Thank you so much for this. Two questions:
1) There are many different elements in which you say “have students practice X, Y, and Z”. This seems really time consuming. I see my students for 350 minutes every two weeks, as long as there are 5 day weeks, and we started school on Aug 30th. How can a teacher possibly give enough time to look at all of these different individual pieces?
2) For my own personal writing, and then when I have taught writing when students are using word processing (Google Docs or Word), I have always said they should write their opening statement / introduction last. Once you have said what you’re going to say, then you can go back and introduce what you have said. I learned this summer though that these are all written by hand. Would it be bad to teach students to leave some space to go back and write their full intro paragraph + thesis statement after they’ve done a bit of brainstorming?
Appreciate you and your resources!
Hi, Chris: So sorry I took so long getting back to you. There is no way for students to improve their writing without a ton of practice. If you have a limited amount of time, focus on essay writing and listening practice because those are the hardest parts for the students.
Yes, I would have students practice writing by hand since that is what they will be doing on the exam. The more similar the practice activities are to the exam itself, the better for the students. It also relieves test anxiety.
I’m not sure I understand the last question. I would have students brainstorm first, then write their thesis statement and three reasons, then organize their essay using a graphic organizer, then filling in with the details. Does this help?
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Are you struggling to find examples of AP Spanish essays? Look no further!
In this article, we’ll explore various essay samples that will help you ace your AP Spanish exam.
From cultural comparison essays to persuasive and literary analysis essays, we’ve got you covered.
Whether you’re looking for inspiration or guidance, our expertly crafted examples will provide you with a solid foundation.
So, sit back, relax, and let us take you on a journey through the world of AP Spanish essay writing.
You should start your essay on immigration with an analysis of the causes and effects of this complex issue.
Immigration challenges and cultural assimilation are two key aspects of this topic that need to be explored. Immigration challenges refer to the difficulties faced by individuals and families as they navigate the process of moving to a new country. These challenges can include language barriers, discrimination, and the struggle to find employment and housing.
On the other hand, cultural assimilation refers to the process by which immigrants adopt the customs, language, and values of their new country. It’s important to examine both the positive and negative effects of cultural assimilation, as it can lead to a loss of cultural identity but also foster greater integration and acceptance within society.
Understanding these causes and effects is crucial in developing a comprehensive understanding of immigration and its impact on individuals and communities.
Analyzing a Cultural Comparison Essay for AP Spanish requires examining the similarities and differences between two cultures in order to gain a deeper understanding. Cultural influences play a significant role in shaping societies and individuals, and by comparing different cultures, we can uncover the various factors that contribute to their uniqueness. One key aspect to consider is language barriers, as language plays a crucial role in communication and expression. To illustrate this, let’s take a look at a table comparing the cultural influences and language barriers between two Spanish-speaking countries, Spain and Mexico:
Cultural Influences | Spain | Mexico |
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Language | Spanish | Spanish |
History | Influenced by Romans, Moors, and other European cultures | Influenced by Aztecs, Mayans, and Spanish colonization |
Cuisine | Paella, tapas, and seafood | Tacos, tamales, and mole sauce |
Traditions | Flamenco, bullfighting, and siestas | Day of the Dead, Mariachi music, and piñatas |
Take a moment to explore an engaging persuasive essay example for AP Spanish and see how the author effectively uses rhetorical strategies to convince the reader.
In this essay, the author discusses the importance of cultural diversity and language proficiency. The author begins by providing a clear thesis statement that highlights the significance of these two factors in today’s globalized world.
Throughout the essay, the author incorporates persuasive language and evidence to support their argument. They use emotional appeals to evoke empathy and understanding from the reader, and logical appeals to provide logical reasoning and evidence.
Additionally, the author uses rhetorical questions to engage the reader and make them reflect on the topic at hand.
Overall, this persuasive essay serves as an excellent example for AP Spanish students to learn how to effectively persuade their audience and convey their message.
In order to understand the intricacies of a literary analysis essay in AP Spanish, start by examining the author’s use of literary devices and the overall structure of the essay. This will allow you to gain a deeper understanding of the cultural influences and literary techniques employed by the writer.
Literary devices such as symbolism, imagery, and foreshadowing can reveal underlying themes and messages in the text. By analyzing the author’s use of these devices, you can uncover the deeper meanings and intentions behind their words.
Additionally, the overall structure of the essay, including the introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, plays a crucial role in conveying the writer’s argument and supporting evidence. By examining these elements, you can develop a comprehensive understanding of the literary analysis essay in AP Spanish.
You should read at least two synthesis essay samples for AP Spanish in order to gain a better understanding of the writing style and structure. This will help you familiarize yourself with the expectations and requirements of this type of essay. By analyzing these samples, you can learn how to effectively organize your ideas and arguments, as well as how to incorporate evidence from multiple sources.
Additionally, examining synthesis essay samples will allow you to see examples of effective language use, such as using transitions to connect ideas and incorporating appropriate vocabulary. Overall, reading synthesis essay samples is a valuable exercise in understanding the synthesis essay structure and developing your own writing skills.
What are the key elements to consider when writing an ap spanish essay on immigration.
When writing an AP Spanish essay on immigration, consider key elements such as organization, vocabulary choice, and grammar. Use clear and concise sentences, incorporate relevant examples, and support your arguments with evidence.
To effectively analyze a cultural comparison essay for AP Spanish, start by carefully examining the similarities and differences between the cultures being compared. Look for patterns, themes, and cultural nuances to provide a comprehensive and insightful analysis.
To effectively analyze a persuasive essay example for AP Spanish, identify persuasive techniques such as ethos, pathos, and logos. Consider how the author appeals to emotions, credibility, and logic to persuade the reader.
Approaching analysis in a literary analysis essay, consider the author’s use of literary techniques. By examining the text closely, you can identify how the author employs symbolism, imagery, and characterization to convey their message effectively.
To understand and analyze a synthesis essay sample for AP Spanish, start by breaking down the text and identifying key themes and arguments. Then, analyze the author’s use of evidence and rhetorical strategies to support their claims.
In conclusion, despite the challenges and objections that may arise, it’s crucial to recognize the importance of studying and mastering the Spanish language, specifically in the context of the AP Spanish exam.
By immersing ourselves in the language, we gain a deeper understanding and appreciation of the rich Hispanic culture, literature, and history.
Let’s embrace this opportunity to broaden our horizons, connect with others, and become global citizens who can truly appreciate the beauty of the Spanish language.
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The ultimate guide to 2015 ap® spanish language writing frqs.
This study guide, based on the AP® Spanish Language FRQ section from the 2015 exam, will walk you through writing FRQ questions and offer examples and strategies to assist you in earning a high score. It will do this by dissecting the 2015 FRQ test to provide detailed information on what test scorers look for in top scores. Examples of previous year’s test prompts and previous test-takers’ work will reveal what to avoid when writing your own answers come test day.
Question #1, referred to as the Presentational Writing component of the AP® Spanish Language FRQ, asked that students scan a document – an email, text message, or invitation, perhaps – and reply with a written response.
The 2015 AP® FRQ #1 in the writing section asked tests takers to sustain interaction through a written e-mail message received in relation to a potential scholarship to go to Peru. Using a formal form of address, they were asked to include a greeting and a closing, respond to two questions posed in the email, and elicit further information on a topic of their choice in the message. Students were expected to use an assortment of vocabulary, such as idiomatic and culturally applicable terminology. The allotted time to complete this task was 15 minutes.
Student’s written response.
Test scorers recommend students follow the directions so that they answer what is being asked of them. If, for example, an email prompt asks that you “include a greeting and a closing,” so be sure to include this in your reply. In the above excerpt, the test-taker clearly understands the task at hand and responds to the email appropriately. They begin with a well-established introduction and continue by providing all of the asked for information. The above example shows how the writer answered posed questions and requested information, while at the same time drawing upon her cultural knowledge of Peru to make comparisons to her own community in the United States ( el seviche es una comida tradicional ).
In general, the test scorer found the essay clear and easy to read due to the employment of strong vocabulary, idiomatic expressions, and minimal grammatical errors ( maravillosa oportunidad; cambio de costumbres; comidas rapidas ).
Remember to show off your language skills by building some complexity in your responses! The above example by the same student also earned high points for their use of compound sentences with the subjunctive ( Espero haber respondido todas sus preguntas y que le sean de gran utilidad ).
This test-taker continues to do a fair job of responding to the email by offering a suitable salutation and closing.
Be sure to address the task or answer the question presented to you. In the above example, they answer what kinds of difficulties a foreigner might experience while living in another country like Peru. Unfortunately, though, the test-taker did not request any further information, one of the requirements of the prompt, thus negatively impacting the final score.
Test scorers further noted that though the use of language is mostly correct, the writer only attempts verbs in present tense (S in embargo, me acostumbro ) and simple sentence structures ( Tambien, no voy a tener que pagar tanto después que me gradúo de la universidad ). You are encouraged to use difficult sentence structures, but of course be sure you use them correctly. Practice these prior to the exam so you know them! The failure to try more advanced tenses and structures resulted in a lower test score.
This test-taker did not provide a proper response to the given task. For starters, their greeting is not in the appropriate formal register ( Estimado Natalia ).
The writer demonstrates in the response that they did not fully understand what was required in their essay. The above excerpt indicates that the writer believed they had already won the scholarship and joined the program.
The incorrect use of language makes understanding the email reply very difficult. Often the writer relies on direct English translations ( no estando familiar con locación, no conociendo muchos gentes; porque ellos forma quien usted es! ). You can also see in the above example that the student does not employ the appropriate gender modifiers ( muchos gentes ), plural agreements ( experiencias como este ), and lacks subject-verb agreement ( ellos forma ).
The incorrect verb tenses are employed from time to time ( es posible que hay oportunidades encontrar trabajos ), and direct English to Spanish translations are common ( Por favor, si usted irá en este experiencia, usted dice como lo fue! ). The response lost major points on account of this.
Test scorers noted that at times students had difficulty comprehending the email. For example, instead of answering how the trip to Peru would impact their lives, they talked about how the experience impacted them at the time they received the email. This indicated that students should brush up on their verb tenses in preparation for questions like these.
Students often only gave the bare minimum of answers to posed questions. Scorers encourage test-takers to go deeper into detail when giving their replies. It is important to note that the body/main part of the written text is where students can really show off their language skills, describing specific details to earn the highest scores.
It’s a good idea to studying various modes of communication, be it writing a greeting, answering questions, asking for clarification or more information, or drafting a closing statement. Also, students often used an informal register when responding to the email. Go over the differences between the informal ( tú ) and formal ( usted ) so that you know when to use which for the test.
Question #2, referred to as the Persuasive Essay component of the AP® Spanish Language exam, asked students to synthesize an argument from several sources like articles, tables, graphs, or audio artifacts to express their beliefs on a particular theme.
On the 2015 AP® Spanish FRQ #2 writing section, test-takers were asked to write a persuasive essay for a Spanish writing contest, in which they were asked to answer the question: “Is it beneficial for a company to allow their employees to work from home?” Using three supplementary sources, which presented three diverse viewpoints and employed statistical information on the topic, in both print and audio form, students were encouraged to incorporate each of the three arguments given to formulate and defend their own standpoint. They were given six minutes to read the directions, essay topic, and the printed material. Afterward, they listened to the audio recording twice. They then had 40 minutes to complete their essay.
AP® Spanish Language exam scorers want to see that test-takers fully understand the questions they are presented with. Because this essay presents thorough arguments that draw upon the three given sources, it is clear that the student comprehended the task at hand. As you can see here in the above excerpt, the introduction presents the debate and then clearly takes a position.
Operative transitions and consistent language devices exemplified in the excerpts above ( Al hablar del ; También se pueden destacar ; En otro aspecto ) also make this student’s essay easy to follow and comprehensible.
As shown above, the same writer does a commendable job of reiterating their own original point of view with a succinct summary in the conclusion.
The student does make some grammar ( de el and se ha convertido en una opción ), and subjunctive ( sin que interfieran temas in the example above) errors, though these do not subtract from the overall command of the language that is evident in this response.
Keep in mind that test scorers like to see paragraphs with clear topic sentences followed by well-organized supporting sentences, and incorporate each of the sources you’re being asked to discuss. Link paragraphs with transitional phrases like those the student used above, or others ( de esta manera, como resultado, además de eso ).
The essay above gets the job done fairly well. It presents a persuasive argument through basic consideration and explanation of the three source materials. The scorer notes, however, that the writer could have done better at incorporating the sources into a more cohesive argument. As you can see in the examples above, sources are referenced parenthetically rather than in the context of the argument itself. The use of transitional phrases would have greatly improved this aspect of the essay.
Test takes will want to avoid translating English structures and spellings into Spanish, as the same author has done here above ( la enviromenta; Dejando que los empleados trabajar; porque no tendrían tomar tiempo ).
Though this person does use some complex sentence structure, ( Si un empleado se volviera enferm…en su oficina!, for example) many are borrowed from the given texts and do not display personal command of the language. That being said, the essay has only a few mistakes, and it is generally understandable.
Overall, the essay presented here is a fair response. For a better score, test scorers recommend incorporating each of the sources you’re being asked to discuss but integrate the material rather than simply labeling it. If using difficult sentence structures, be sure you use them correctly. Practice these prior to the example so that you’ll have them down to a science!
This essay does not show that the test-taker fully understood the topic or the task at hand; instead they wrote about overtime hours rather than working from home. The above excerpt exemplifies the writer’s distraction from the topic; here the discussion turns to the use of tablets in schools when they should have been discussing the three source materials.
There are major organizational problems and inconsistencies in the essay. For example, the introduction and conclusion contradict the author’s opinion on the issue ( No estaria de acuerdo con las horas extras; En conclusión, si estoy de acuerdo con las horas extras ). The essay lacks command of transitional phrases that could help scaffold a stronger argument ( Un ejemplo is overused, for instance).
Overall, there are major problems with the language and spelling ( agradesca; saven ), as well as grammar, syntax, and usage ( esque…eh uso de tecnología durante en las oficinas; Estaria de acuerdo si todos dejarian la … y convertirlo en ser un buen trabajador ).
Keep in mind that it is important to incorporate each of the sources you’re being asked to discuss and be sure to follow the directions so that you answer what is being asked of you. Be persuasive by stating a strong argument backed up with the sources provided to support your position. Stay focused and on task! Also, to avoid spelling issues – study your vocabulary!
Be sure to refer to all three sources in your argument, as the directions say. Do not simply provide personal experience with the subject matter at hand, but use your point of view to try to persuade the reader to side with you. This does not mean listing the pros and cons of an issue, but taking a side and defending it. Consider all parties involved in the debate; in the example provided here, consider how working from home impacts not only the employee, but the company where they work as well.
On another note, many students misunderstood some of the statistical data provided in the material sources. Get some practice by reviewing this type of data before your exam. You may also want to freshen up on how to cite sources so that you have a handle on direct and indirect quoting before test day.
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The AP exam tests four skills: writing, speaking, reading, and listening.
You will be required to complete two writing sections on the exam: an email and a persuasive essay . Let’s take a closer look!
In this section of the exam, you will be responding to an email. Make sure to do the following:
In this section of the exam, you will write a persuasive essay on a given topic while referencing three sources of information about the topic. Remember to do the following:
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This section of the test is often the most nerve-racking for students. You will be required to generate responses to a mock conversation. Just keep calm and try to do the following:
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SURVIVAL IS A PROMISE: The Eternal Life of Audre Lorde , by Alexis Pauline Gumbs
Audre Lorde was in an auditorium at Stanford reading “ Power ,” a poem about Clifford Glover, a 10-year-old African American boy fatally shot by the police in 1973, when the walls began to shake. Lorde did not notice the earthquake, mistaking some audience members’ sudden flight to the exit as an unwillingness to listen. She raised her voice and kept reading. In her canonical poetry collection “The Black Unicorn” (1978), she swears an oath to stick it out: “May I never lose that terror that keeps me brave.”
Anecdotes of endurance like this one enliven “Survival Is a Promise,” a new biography by Alexis Pauline Gumbs of the self-identified “ Black, lesbian, mother, warrior, poet ,” who died in 1992 . For the past two decades, the gold standard of Lorde biographies has been Alexis De Veaux’s groundbreaking “Warrior Poet” (2004), the only comprehensive resource regarding Lorde’s life aside from her semi-fictionalized autobiography, “Zami: A New Spelling of My Name.” With “Survival Is a Promise” Gumbs, a scholar and poet herself, takes a different tack, delivering an unabashed celebration of Lorde, a legally blind girl with a stutter and Caribbean roots who became the first Black poet to deliver a solo reading sponsored by the Academy of American Poets.
Unconventional in structure as well as tone, “Survival Is a Promise” features brief chapters arranged by topic — Lorde’s fondness for bees; locks of her hair now preserved at Spelman College ; her photographs of St. Croix after Hurricane Hugo — along with Gumbs’s ecological, geological and cosmic reflections. Gumbs explains, for example, Lorde’s symbiotic relationship with her long-term partner Frances Clayton, who gave up a tenured position in psychology at Brown to live with Lorde and her children, through the orientation of sunflowers in relation to the sun.
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Lorde was born in 1934 in Harlem to immigrant parents from the island of Grenada. Her light-skinned mother, Linda, worked as a dishwasher until her employer discovered that she wasn’t Spanish and fired her. She later helped Lorde’s father, Byron, who ran a real estate office for Black families excluded from the housing market. In her journal, Lorde wrote, “I had one of those grotesque childhoods that turns a person into a poem.” Her parents expected total obedience from Audre and her two sisters — De Veaux says Audre’s mother beat her almost daily for her “insolence” — though her father also encouraged reading, bringing home pallets of books won for cheap at auctions.
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To effectively analyze a persuasive essay example for AP Spanish, identify persuasive techniques such as ethos, pathos, and logos. Consider how the author appeals to emotions, credibility, and logic to persuade the reader.
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Question #2, referred to as the Persuasive Essay component of the AP® Spanish Language exam, asked students to synthesize an argument from several sources like articles, tables, graphs, or audio artifacts to express their beliefs on a particular theme.
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In this section of the exam, you will write a persuasive essay on a given topic while referencing three sources of information about the topic. Remember to do the following: Start your essay with an attention getter. Provide a thesis that you refer back to throughout the essay. Use proper basic and advanced Spanish punctuation.
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