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International Development Personal Statement (Ultimate Guide)

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When applying for a university degree or a job in international development, your personal statement is one of the most important parts of the application.

Your personal statement gives you a chance to explain your reasons for wanting to work in or study international development, and so getting it right can be crucial to progressing in your development career. With that said, what are the key things to include in an international development personal statement?

A personal statement for an international development job or course should show why you want to work in development, that you have the skills the sector needs and that you’re aware of the major trends in international development. You also should include previous work experience and study, and show your interest in current global events.

But with university degrees and international development job applications giving only limited space for your personal statement, how best are you to a personal statement for the strongest application possible?

Show Why You Want to Work in International Development

Whether for an application for a university degree in international development, or for a job in the humanitarian and development sector, your personal statement needs to highlight why you are motivated to work assisting people affected by poverty, war and disasters.

Ensure your motivations for wanting to study or work in international development are personal to you, and are made clear in your statement.

Reflect on genuine experiences and your own thoughts around how international development can improve the world for the most vulnerable. Focus on why these motivate you to work in international in your personal statement.

As well as making clear your personal motivations for wanting to study or work in international development in your personal statement, is it also important to highlight your longer-term career aims. Demonstrate your immediate, mid-term and eventual international development career goals in your personal statement.

Focus on broad international development areas, as well as macro issues that specifically interest you, such as humanitarian aid, development, the environment or global health. Your international development personal statement should show your commitment to long-term study or work in the development and humanitarian industries.

Alongside showing your motivation and career goals for international development, your personal statement needs to be focused on specific jobs, functions and areas of international development that interest you.

Where-as before you detailed the broad areas of international development you are interested in, your personal statement also needs to include details.

Although you can list specific international development roles or further study you are aiming for, your personal statement can explain how functions such as ‘humanitarian logistics’, ‘renewable energy research’ or ‘community development’ are you aims.

By including specifics goals in your personal statement, it shows your knowledge of the of the international development industry as well as why the course or job you are applying for will help you get there.

International Development Online Courses

If you are looking to study or work in international development, taking an online short course can be a great way to boost your application. We highly recommend the course Management of International Development: Towards Agenda 2030 . It looks at the current international development model as well as the trends that will be key to global development in the near future. Follow the link to the course’s page for more information.

We also think the online course Sustainable Development in the 21st Century by Yonsei University to be one of the best for those interested in international development. Delivered by former UN Secretary General Ban-ki Moon, the online course would be a great addition to the personal statement of anyone looking to study or work in international development. The link is to the course’s page.

If you are interested in the practical methods used on international development projects, we recommend the online course How To Design & Fund International Development NGO Projects. The course teaches students the tools needed to establish and run impactful development projects. Click the link to visit the course’s page for more information.

Demonstrate You Have the Skills for International Development

International development is a competitive industry. When applying for jobs or study, it is important your personal statement shows you have the skills required for international development work.

There are several crucial skills relevant to international development that your personal statement should demonstrate and the first is being able to face challenges. Jobs and research in international development often require working in difficult and remote locations abroad for extended periods of time, whilst solving complex local, and global, issues.

Be sure to demonstrate how you have overcome challenges in your personal statement for international development.

Another key skill needed in the international development industry you should show through your personal statement is being organised. As with showing how you overcome challenges, be sure to give good examples of times where you have used personal organisation and team work to achieve aims in your personal statement.

Ideally, make the examples as relevant to international development work as possible, and avoid simply stating you have good organisation skills – detail a time you used those skills to achieve a result. You can include a number of short anecdotes in your international development personal statement to show you have the skills the industry needs.

Problem solving is also a very important skill to have when working in or conducting research for international development.

Your personal statement for international development courses or jobs should explore how you have overcome problems by giving strong examples. As before, the example of your problem-solving skills in your personal statement should be as closely related to international development as possible.

However, if you are applying for a bachelor’s degree and/or don’t have any experience, highlight that you know problem solving and other skills are needed in international development and then demonstrate your skills through a different example. Doing this also helps your personal statement to show you have a good understanding of skills needed in the international development industry. 

The final skill you should show in your international development personal statement is working with people from other cultures and backgrounds.

International development work and university courses are made up of people from all over the world. It is important to show in your personal statement that you can work well with different people. Make sure you highlight you understand this is a key part of international development work in your personal statement through actual examples and demonstrate times you have worked in a multi-cultural team taking ideas from many different world views.

Show an Understanding of International Development

When writing a personal statement for an international development job or university degree, it is important to show that you have researched and have a good understanding of the industry.

Firstly, your personal statement should demonstrate you know the current big trends in international development. Make sure you are following some major international development organisations and reading some of the latest books and articles.

By including reference to the current international development trends that are relevant to your area of interest in your personal statement you are showing you understand the international development industry.

As well as including reference to some the major longer-term trends in international development in your personal statement, it is also important to reference important current events relevant to aid and development.

Global events have a major impact on international development work and it is important your personal statement explains how you see these events affect the industry and your choice of work or study. Exploring current events and their impact on international development in your personal statement is a good way to show your understanding the development industry.

Another good way to show that you understand international development work in your personal statement is to include reference to the major organisations, donors and key figures in the development industry. Link this to the specific job or course you are applying for, but including details of relevant actors in the development industry is a good way to show your international development knowledge in your personal statement.

Ensure you have done thorough research on the organisation, course and high-level staff where you are applying for and include this in your international development personal statement.

A final area of skills it is important to demonstrate when writing a personal statement for international development work or study is computer skills. Like all modern industries, international development professionals need to be skilled in using programmes such as Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook and Access.

Be sure to clearly state your computer competencies in your international development personal statement.  If you have additional tech or computer skills, include these too, as international development work and courses can use a wide range of technologies.

Detail Your Relevant International Development Experiences

Your personal statement for an international development job or university degree should highlight the relevant experiences you have completed related to the development industry. There are several ways your personal statement can this.

Firstly, include any international development work experience you have. This can be previous international development jobs or internships if you have completed them. If not, include relevant jobs as way to demonstrate the key skills relevant to the international development industry as discussed above.

As well as detailing any professional international development or related work experience you have in your personal statement, it is good to include volunteering experience related to international development.

Many people interested in a career in the development sector complete short-term volunteer trips around the world to gain experience. However, be sure to volunteer with a reputable volunteer agency and do your research.

Although international development volunteering can be good on your personal statement, the development industry is turning away from ‘volutourism’.

Another important aspect to include in your international development personal statement is any volunteering you have done locally. Don’t feel that you need to volunteer abroad to get relevant international development experience.

Actually, volunteering locally, especially with groups working with refugees and migrants in your home community can, be really beneficial for your international development personal statement. Be sure to also include any volunteering you have done even if it is not directly related to international development, as this can also show a lot of the attitudes and skilled needed for development work.

Connect Your Previous Study to International Development

If you’re applying for a degree or job in international development and writing a personal statement, you should include details of your previous studies.

Firstly, include any previous university courses you have done in your personal statement. Including university degrees in your personal statement can show your dedication to working or further study in the development field, as well as your ability to apply yourself to rigorous research.

Ideally your previous study was relevant to international development. If not, still include them, as they show your level of academic qualifications.

Another good area of previous study to include in your personal statement for international development is any short or online courses you have completed.

There are a large number of development organisations providing quality courses in a wide range of development fields and taking these is a great way to gain a strong understanding of international development. Taking online and short courses to include in your personal statement also shows your dedication to development work. Including online and short courses in your personal statement can be especially good if your previous university degree was not in a subject related to international development.

When including your studies in your personal statement, it is important to show what you have learnt and how it applies to international development.

Avoid simply listing qualifications and short courses. Rather, describe how these have informed your understanding of international development in your personal statement.

It is also good to show how your studies have encouraged you to work in international development, as well as how they have influenced your choices of specific development areas. Your personal statement could also include how your studies have changed your view of development work and international development issues.

Engage with World Events and International Development

International development work, study and research is highly influenced by current world events.

When writing a personal statement for international development, be sure to convey your knowledge and understanding of what is happening globally. Showing you are engaged with the world is crucial to international development so your personal statement needs to demonstrate this.

It is also important your personal statement links current events directly to international development work. It can be good to show in your personal statement how world events have influenced your choice to work in or study international development.

Another good way to show your understanding of the world and engagement in international development in your personal statement is including your travels.

Although you should include any volunteer trips, it can also be beneficial to include personal trips you have made in your statement. Crucially, link these to development work and explain how they have influenced your understanding of the world and global development.

You do not need to have travelled to developing countries, including your own explorations and how they have influenced your thinking around development can demonstrate an engagement with the world in your personal statement.

A good point to ensure is included in your international development personal statement is your engagement with news media and journalism. As it is important to show your understanding of current world events in your international development personal statement, so ensure you include how and where you learn about world events.

Convey that digesting news and keeping informed of events, especially is areas of the world less covered by mainstream media, is important to you. This can be important in a personal statement for international development.

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MA in International Development

• Sample personal statement

20 May, 2015

Ma in international development share.

• 12 May, 2013

I am M Hasan from Bangladesh. I am writing this statement with great joy to study the course MA International Development at the University of East Anglia (UEA). This course is designed to provide a broad knowledge of moral, practical, and political challenges that are faced by the world today. More importantly, this course will teach me how the world politics, morals, gender equality, climate change and access to education shapes the economy. If I get the opportunity to pursue this course, it will also increase my skills of decision making into a shape and how they grow and prosper. As I want to do a career in this field, I am confident that this program will equip me with a lot of tools and skills required to do so.

I have reviewed the course specification of MA International Development at the University of East Anglia and found some modules which are adjusted with the latest developments. The course provides to get the opportunity to be able to make decisions that will help me understand the forces that dictate the level of development in an economy. The modules include Contemporary World Development, and Development Perspectives among the Core modules.

After this, the university provides 2 sets of optional modules totalling in 19 optional modules to choose from. After doing research of my prospective job market, my previous experiences, and current interests, I would like to take Governance, Democracy and Development and Rural Livelihoods and Agrarian Change, given the chance. These modules would help me to broaden my knowledge range of disciplines for a career in international development.

I have completed my Master of Business Administration in Finance from the University of Dhaka, Bangladesh in 2012. After that, I started my professional career as a First Executive Officer in Jamuna Bank. In the meantime, I felt that I need to gain more comprehensive knowledge to explore human rights in the environment and international crimes. Then I have completed another master’s degree; Master of Human Security in 2019 from the University of Dhaka, Bangladesh. Now I am working as District Commandant in Bangladesh Ansar & VDP. My core responsibility is to ensure personal security, community security & political security of mass people and conduct various training for the socio-economic benefits. I need to get this MSc degree for my promotion. With my academic and professional experience, I am confident that my aspects and professional goal make me a suitable candidate for the course.

Through my research, I have come to know that this MA degree have been ranked as one of the top-10 in the world for development studies in 2021 according to QS World University Rankings. Therefore, the course modules are specially designed to the requirements of the development sector. By completing this MA degree, I will gain knowledge in problem solving in environments to examine political, economic, and socio-cultural transformations in the world and explore the dynamics, challenges and opportunities confronting various societies. My previously earned skills and conducting of further research programs, and detailed appreciation of my current knowledge and developments will help me to complete my prospective study. I hope my chosen course will make it better and further open doors for my profession.

The UK’s academic reputation is globally renowned, especially the study environment in my country follows traditional systems of education which quite different. Furthermore, due to political chaos, students often struggle to finish their degrees on time. Moreover, a UK degree prepares its graduates with great academic prowess and develops personal and professional skills fundamental for organizational success. Skills attained in and carried over from the UK are vital when aiming for organizational growth and a competitive edge. Moreover, there are almost 20k UK alumni working in my home country by using their knowledge and experience gained from the UK. This staggering number of post-graduation successes has strengthened my ambition to get a degree from the UK. And the degrees awarded by UK universities are recognized all over the world by recruiters and academics alike and most universities have a graduate employability rate of almost 90%. These are the reasons why I choose the UK over other countries to pursue my higher education.

University of East Anglia is my choice as it is also incredibly welcoming to international students. The University of East Anglia (UEA) was founded in 1963 and is a public research university which is another attraction. The university is placed in the top 20 higher education institutions in the UK: 12 positions in the Complete University Guide 2018 and 18-th position in the Guardian University Guide 2018. Moreover, to support students the University have invested heavily in their facilities to shape the physical and intellectual environment of learning. The alumni of this university include some notable names, such as Greg James (BBC Radio 1 Presenter), Ian McEwan who’s a Booker Prize Winner and Kazuo Ishiguro who won a Nobel Prize in Literature in 2017. Tutors are highly qualified academics and focus on education and research for their respective subject areas. If I get the chance to study at this university, I will have the opportunity to gain real-world knowledge and transferable skills that will allow me to become an accredited development specialist. It would be a great achievement for me if I get the opportunity to study at University of East Anglia.

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How To Write A Personal Statement For Masters (17 PDF Sample Examples)

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A personal statement for masters program is one of the most important parts of your college application and writing a good one is what’s the exception between receiving an offer and being rejected.

If you’ve been tasked with presenting a personal statement, you should keep in mind that whatever you submit must put you forward as the right candidate for the course. Additionally, it should convince the admissions officers that you deserve a place on your program of study.

Achieving the above, is a skill most postgraduate students are yet to acquire but thankfully this article on How To Write A Personal Statement For Masters covers everything you need to know on doing this.

In this article you’ll learn:

• What is a personal statement?
• Tips for making your personal statement for masters stand out
• How to write a personal statement for masters
• Personal statement for masters sample
• Examples of personal statement for masters
• Conclusion – things to avoid when writing a personal statement for masters

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What Is a Personal Statement?

A personal statement AKA admissions or application essay or statement of purpose is a type of essay or written statement a candidate presents to a college, university, or graduate school they are applying to, explaining why they want to attend that school, study a particular course, and why they would be a perfect fit for these things.

A personal statement for masters is an essay you submit specifically for your postgraduate application. Writing one presents the opportunity for you to promote yourself to a school and show the admissions teachers that you are the perfect candidate for a course.

Tips For Making Your Personal Statement For Masters Stand Out

Before we get into how you should write a statement of purpose for masters, we would first like to share with you certain tips to include in your essay to make it stand out from that of other applicants and be convincing enough to any admissions officer that reads it. The tips we have mentioned here, cover general things like starting and ending your personal statement, timing, length, and what to include and what not to include in the essay, etc.

1. Starting And Ending A Personal Statement

When starting a personal statement, you would want to right off the bat grab the reader’s attention. To do this, start the statement by writing about your degree of choice, next why you want to study it and then how you got interested in it.

The next 2 sentences after that should cover a summary of your background in the chosen field, and you conclude by saying what you plan to do once you acquire your graduate degree.

Also start with that the evaluators reading want to hear first, then every other information should come second. You will notice we’ve used in the sop examples for masters we will share with you later in this article.

2. Plan Ahead

A personal statement is not something you rush while writing, which means if you want to get something good before you application then you must start to decide things like the length and how long it should take to complete.

Let us throw more light on this…

For length, a personal statement should be brief ranging somewhere between 500 -700 words, although schools often detect how long it should be. So, this is dependent on the institution you are applying to.

In terms of what to say in a statement, you could include personal experiences like why you were driven to apply for the program, an experience you had with a scholar in your chosen discipline, a course you took that inspired you to pursue masters, or a key moment during your studies which further motivated you.

No matter what you decide to write, just keep in mind that you need to take your time to craft something good even if it means creating several drafts before the real thing and do not forget to proofread the statement for errors.

3. Research Your Program Of Study

Researching your program of study is one way to establish that you truly understand the discipline you’re getting into and prove to the admissions officer that you thoroughly thought about it before applying.

And because you want to put yourself forward as a serious candidate, one way to make you research easier is for you to visit the website of the department you are applying to. This page will contain information about faculty members, their specialisation, and publications.

From the intel, you gathered there you can now identify which professors match your interests and which ones you will benefit the most from learning under. After you’ve found this out, relate the same in a sentence or two in your statement of purpose for masters.

Example: “I would be honoured to study under the tutelage of Professor Nadia whose work I found resonated strongly with my beliefs and intended projects in this course”.

4. Avoid Clichés, Junks, And Many Details

When writing a statement of purpose for master degree try to avoid clichés, junks, and unnecessary details so that you don’t lose or bore your readers in between. Be as concise as possible, even if it’s your chance to express yourself.

A personal statement is an opportunity for the admissions committee to get information that tells the that you are suitable for the course. So, when you overpower your statement with too many words, stories, and useless details, you come off as someone who is just trying to meet the word count.

5. Include Your Personal History Only If It Adds To The Statement

Do not include your personal history in your statement of intent for masters if it is not relevant to your purpose of study. This means no need for you to tell that story about that time you helped someone treat a cut and immediately realised that you wanted to be a doctor or nurse or how you developed a taste for reading at a very young age.

We can guarantee you that the hundreds of other applications competing for the same spot you are felt the same way, so saying those things really doesn’t make you unique.

On the other hand, if you are going to add personal history to your statement, you can put in things like an internship you did and the experience you got from the job, a major research project you ran by yourself, publications you’ve read or published, conferences you’ve attended or presentations you’ve done. These experiences are more concrete and are directly related to your program of study. They also set you apart from other applicants.

6. Don't Use The Same Personal Statement For All Your Applications

One common mistake applicant make that you shouldn’t is using the same statement of purpose for master degree for all your applications. Using the same information repeatedly even if you are going to change the university names is risky and could land you in a big mistake on a day you forget to be thorough.

All programmes have their own unique set of questions they want to see answered and information they need in your personal statement.

And even if some of them like extracurricular activities, proposal for project, why you are applying to the school, your unique qualities, and research works you’re doing might appear the same, do not use one statement to respond to all of them.

Write a new unique personal statement every time you want to apply.

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How To Write A Personal Statement for Masters

When writing a personal statement for masters there are several steps and ground rules you need to follow to ensure that it comes out good enough to impress the admissions team of a school, and ultimately convince them to give you a spot on your program of study.

If writing one is something you are currently struggling with and can’t seem to get down the process of it right no matter what, this section on how to write a personal statement for masters, discusses in detail everything you need to get help with yours.

There are 4 parts to consider when writing your personal statement and we have listed them below:

1. Planning A Personal Statement

A personal statement is a piece of writing showing your academic interests and is only for application purposes which means there is no room for any autobiographical information in it about your personal life. Be as to-the-point as possible when writing it and stick to telling the school why you are the right person for the course, plus any other extra information detailing your achievements.

Before You Start:

Allot plenty of time to write your msc personal statement so that you don’t rush it. Remember, this simple piece of writing is your one shot at convincing a school that you are the best applicant they’ve seen and as such can either make or break your application.

Read the information expected of you from the university, rules and guidelines given, selection criteria and understand what they mean. Also research the institution.

Do a thorough research on the course you are applying for; this will help you explain better why you want to study it. The tutors interviewing you can tell when you are lying and presenting yourself as uninformed can cost you the admission.

Ensure that you don’t use the same personal statement for all your applications.

When Writing:

When writing the statement there are some questions to ask yourself that can help you plan it better. Those questions are:

• Why you want to study a master’s and how does it benefit you in future?
• How does the course you have chosen fit into your pre-existing skill set?
• How do you stand out from the crowd as an applicant - e.g., work experiences you’ve had in the same field you are applying for?
• What do you aspire to do or be as a future career and how will the course help you achieve that?
• How can your work or skillsets contribute positively to the department/ university you are applying to, or society at large?

On the other hand, if you are applying for the masters to change from the field you studied in your undergraduate to another field, you should tell the school why you decided to take a different path in your studies.

Questions to ask yourself for this include:

• Your reason for deciding to change your discipline.
• How your undergraduate degree will be material for bringing fresh insights into your masters course.
• How changing your study path will help you attain your future career.

2. Structuring A Personal Statement

Having good structure for your personal statement for master degree is important because it ensures that everything from the beginning, middle, and ending of the statement is written and equally falls in place perfectly.

We’ve left some tips for you below to help you:

Start your personal statement with an attention-grabbing introduction that is not dramatic or cliché. That means you should not begin with any of these over-used phrases we’ve listed out below:

For as long as I remember…

Since my childhood…

I want to apply to this course because I’ve always felt a strong connection to it…

All my life, I have always loved…

My interest in (course) always ran deeper than…

I’ve always been zealous about…

Ever since I was a child, I’ve always wanted to pursue a career in…

My past educational experiences have always…

You would want to be as snappy as possible with your opening because the admission officer has over a hundred applications to read and can’t waste all their time on yours. This means you should avoid overpowering it with unnecessary facts, quotes, and stories from your life.

The middle part of your ma personal statement is where the main content of the write-up should be. This is where you show your dedication to the course you’ve chosen, what motivated you to choose it, and why you are the right candidate for it.

When writing the middle part of a graduate personal statement, you should:  

• Give concrete reasons why you want to study a course at the University. The reason could be because of how the course is aligned to your future career or the University’s reputation in teaching that program.
• Mention relevant things like projects, dissertations, or essays you’ve done, and any work experience you have.
• Show proof of your core skills like and how they can contribute to the department.
• Prove what makes you a unique candidate.
• Discuss who your main influences for wanting to study the course are and why.
• Add experiences like memberships to clubs that are related to your field, papers you’ve written before, awards, scholarships, or prizes.
• Draw focus to how the course links to your past and future.
• Mention your academic and non-academic skills and how they fit the course.

For Formatting:

• Keep the statement length between 250 -500 words or as directed by the school.
• Sentences should be no more than 25-30 words.
• Use headings to break up the content – Why this university? Why this subject? Etc.
• Make claims and provide evidence to back each of them up. This can be done by discussing your work experience and academic interests.

Language and tone to use:     

• The tone for your masters application personal statement should be positive and enthusiastic, to show you eagerness to learn and so that you convince the evaluators that you have what it takes to succeed.
• Use exciting and refreshing language, and an engaging opening line.
• Ensure you grammar, punctuations, and spellings are accurate.
• Avoid exaggerated claims you cannot backup.
• Don’t use cliché generic terms and keep your focus on the course.

Keep the ending of your essay for master degree application concise and memorable, leaving no doubt in the admission officers mind that you deserve a spot on the program.

To create the best ending summarise all your key points without dragging it our or repeating yourself. The ending should be simple, end on a positive note and make it clear that the school will be lucky to have you on their program.

Personal Statement for Masters Sample

In this section, we have left a masters personal statement example for you, which you can use as material to write yours for any course of study you are applying to a school for.

Personal Statement PDF

You can also download this statement of purpose sample for masters degree pdf here and take your time to read it later – Personal Statement For Masters Sample .

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Examples of Personal Statement for Masters

We have taken the time to source for some of the best postgraduate personal statement examples, which you can use in addition to the personal statement for masters program example as a template to write yours.

While you scroll through our list, you will find the perfect masters essay example for any field you wish to apply for, from business administration, to Psychology, to information technology, and lots more.

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Conclusion – Things to Avoid When Writing A Personal Statement For Masters When writing a personal statement for university masters, there are some things you should avoid, so that you don’t ruin your essay. We have listed out those things below: •    Avoid negativity. •    Following an online template blindly. •    Do not include unnecessary course modules, personal facts, or extra-curricular activities in your personal statement. •    Do not lie or exaggerate an achievement or event. •    Do not include inspirational quotes to your statement. •    Avoid using clichés, gimmicks, humour, over-used word such as 'passion' or ‘driven’. •    Do not make pleading statements. •    Avoid mentioning key authors or professors in your field without any explanation. •    Avoid using sentences that are too long. •    Avoid flattering the organisation or using patronising terms. •    Do not repeat information in your statement that you have already listed in your application. •    Avoid waffling i.e., writing at length. •    Don’t start writing your personal statement at the last minute.  

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Climate change and international development degree personal statement example (1a) Masters, Sheffield offer

Climate change is arguably the most important and immediate issue of my generation. Academics, advocates and the IPCC make it alarmingly clear that the least developed countries and small islands are increasingly and disproportionately feeling the adverse effects of climate change. Some add that these countries’ vulnerability is compounded by their lack of well-funded, highly-skilled teams with which to participate in complex negotiations. This uneven playing field deeply concerns me and I feel compelled to pursue a path in which I can influence environmental policy so as to protect and empower the poor. I aspire to work towards achieving sustainable and just development in the global south.

In 2013, I volunteered with a school in a coastal town hit by the 2004 Tsunami in Chennai, India. I visited slum dwellers who were still rebuilding their once shattered communities, even nine years later and was struck by the scale of the disaster’s impact on the poor. It is a huge challenge to bring this human vulnerability into the collective conscious and climate negotiations and arguments about causal links move slowly and without sufficient recognition. I quickly realised that I had to engage in a dialogue that puts the rights of affected populations at its centre. I now follow closely those who campaign for climate justice, including Mary Robinson and Professor Lord Stern. They emphasise the need for the Sustainable Development Goals to address strongly the human impacts of environmental change and I am hopeful that this will transpire.

Whilst strengthening the resilience of at-risk groups is crucial, adaptation also urgently requires addressing unavoidable mass migration and displacement. Rising sea levels will cause countries such as the Maldives and Tuvalu to become uninhabitable, forcing populations to flee. There is a pressing need to distinguish between ‘climate migrant’ and ‘climate refugee’ so as to avoid a protection gap and potential mass violation of human rights. I aim to contribute to this agenda.

The School of International Development at UEA is world renowned and to study here would be a dream. The school’s close relationship with the Tyndall Centre provides unrivalled networking opportunities, whilst the programme is attractive for its fantastic, large range of modules. The potential for students to participate in a UNFCCC meeting is exceptional and immensely valuable. This degree would certainly equip me with the specialist knowledge, skills and experience to realise my ambition of influencing environmental policy within a development context. ////

The Department of Geography at Sheffield University is world renowned and to study here would be a dream. The programme is attractive for its interdisciplinary approach and for its Enhanced Language module – an opportunity for me to develop my Spanish, thus adding to my useful skills for international work. I am especially attracted by the invaluable 10-day fieldtrip and the placement-based dissertation, which will build on my practical experience in India and elsewhere. This application of research skills would enhance my appreciation of the real world challenges in climate change work, whilst equipping me well for work in the field.

Through my active membership of Brighton and Hove Labour Party, I have worked closely with councillors and a parliamentary candidate to understand policy and government. I have also been involved in actions to freeze energy bills and protect air quality monitors. This experience will aid me on the course and I will continue my political activism with Sheffield's / UEA’s Labour Society.

An insatiable curiosity of the world has taken me to over 20 countries and I have worked and studied abroad. I follow current affairs closely and subscribe to National Geographic Magazine. I also have an acute awareness of some of the challenges faced by marginalised groups having worked with Gypsies, Travellers, disabled, homeless and trafficked people. Complimented by my strong social science academic background, these experiences ensure I will offer rich, vibrant perspectives to discussions. Having attained a first-class joint honours in my bachelor’s degree whilst successfully balancing employment and internships, I am confident that I will thrive in a rigorous postgraduate environment. I look forward to joining your 2014 cohort!

Universities Applied to:

• UEA (MSc Climate Change and International Development) - Offer
• University of Sheffield (Environmental Change and International Development) - Offer - ACCEPTED

Grades Achieved:

• BSc Psychology and Social Anthropology with professional development (First Class Hons.)
• Psychology (A2) - B
• Business Studies (A2) - C
• English Literature (A2) - B
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Postgraduate Personal Statement Example: Gender, Development & Globalisation

Studying examples of personal statements is an invaluable strategy when applying to a university or college course. 

That’s because personal statement examples can teach you how to write and structure your application, and you can quickly learn how to write a personal statement by examining others.

But with so many university personal statement examples available, how do you know if you’re reading a good one?

Postgraduate personal statements should highlight relevant academic and practical experience, research skills and ambitions and their suitability for the course. This postgraduate personal statement example for Gender, Development & Globalisation considers these three critical elements.

Studying master’s degree personal statement examples can be especially valuable. They’re sometimes referred to as personal mission statements or statements of purpose , so if you’re tasked with writing a personal mission statement, the following example will work for you.

I’ve broken down this personal statement example section by section, with a commentary on each element. 

That way, you’ll see its strengths and weaknesses and get some inspiration for your own personal statement .

Once you’ve read the personal statement example and analysis, you can download a pdf of the whole document to use as inspiration for your own!

Personal Statement Example: Introduction

“In many families in my culture, it is common for the father to undertake significant financial responsibilities and the mother to undertake domestic and parental duties within the home. However, in my family, the opposite is true: my father stays at home, and my mother works outside. I didn’t see anything wrong with this family division until my childhood peers consciously brought up our differences, and some even commented on our family model in unpleasant terms. This was the origin of my gender consciousness and my confusion regarding gender stereotypes and traditional models of family collaboration.

This confusion increased as an undergraduate. In my first year, I ran for a position in the Student Union but lost the election. Of the eight candidates remaining in the final round of interviews, six were female, and two were male. Both male students won the election, to the exclusion of all the female candidates. When I asked the interviewer for feedback, she said, “You’re all excellent, but for the sake of the team’s gender balance, we need two boys.” I felt angry and helpless, and I began to question a system that rejects obviously brilliant women for the sake of so-called gender balance. Why is it more challenging for a woman’s potential to be recognised in both the family and the workplace? Why is it generally accepted that non-male labour is worthless? Why are women frequently unpaid, undervalued, and unrecognised? The need to find answers to questions like these and explore gender issues in the division of household and market labour is the motivation behind my application to read for an MSc in Gender, Development and Globalisation at Buckley University.”

My Commentary and Analysis 

This personal statement example begins by referencing the writer’s strong personal connection with the subject matter. This strategy of starting a statement with an inspirational moment or realisation can work very well, as it draws the reader into your world and adds some motivation and validity to your writing. 

In this case, it’s highly relevant, which is positive. Don’t use an example that doesn’t directly connect to the course you’re applying for!

The writer indicates that they were ‘confused’ by matters relating to gender and family. I would have used words such as ‘engaged’ or ‘intrigued’, as indicating a sense of confusion does slightly weaken the writer’s standing. 

The second paragraph above outlines a further personal experience of gender bias and is a logical development from the childhood questions raised in the opening paragraph. It also gives the writer the opportunity to mention undergraduate study and to show ambition and engagement in co-curricular activities.

However, I would suggest that this is slightly too long. The reader won’t be interested in the details here and will be looking instead for evidence of academic suitability for the course, which the writer has yet to provide.

If you’re struggling with your personal statement introduction, check out my article on how to write perfect opening paragraphs here .

Personal Statement Example: Academic Background

“We have witnessed intense academic and social debates on gender issues in recent years, and the university environment is no exception. I participated in many debates throughout my undergraduate years, researching topics such as gender equality in the workplace, women’s career ceilings, misogynistic speech and gender freedom. I found that these discussions were easily pushed to antagonistic extremes that reflect society’s obsession with stereotypical gender differences. I think it is superficial to attribute the inequality of social structure simply to the biological structure or opposition of gender. While clear in my convictions, I often felt that during debates, my argument lacked depth due to my lack of gender-specific academic studies.

Consequently, I declared an undergraduate major in Diplomacy. This laid a solid knowledge foundation in politics and international relations and allowed me to look beyond my own country and engage with wider aspects of global gender inequality. I was exposed to the history and development of feminist theory and began to examine gender biases and inequalities from both cultural and social perspectives, considering individual and institutional outcomes. However, as my university did not offer a specific course in gender studies, I lacked the opportunity for a systematic study of gender and its research methodology. As a result, I aim to learn more about social structures of gender and theories of power in your Gender Theories: An Interdisciplinary Approach course.”

My Commentary and Analysis

The first paragraph above is a stronger one, and moves this personal statement example into a more academic sphere. There’s some evidence of related vocabulary, and the writer discusses themes and theories that evidence suitability for the course being applied for.

It’s not done in traditional academic terms, and although the writer is showing a clear sense of engagement with the topics, I would like to see more formal academic content included.

The second paragraph does begin to focus on academic background, but in quite a general way. The writer shows some depth in the field and makes arguments about relevant theory, giving the reader some reassurance about their academic capacity.

The writer then makes a strong case for explaining how the course would be of value and quite skillfully turns a negative (lack of formal study in this area) into a positive (justifiable motivation for further study). 

A sense of a dynamic and highly motivated applicant is also emerging. This is someone who has discovered a passion and is taking every opportunity to prepare themselves for further study. Although their route isn’t totally logical, it’s evident that they are dedicated to this subject, and that counts for a great deal.

If you’d like to learn more about structuring your personal statement or statement of purpose , check out my awesome Personal Statement Template eBook here . It’s full of detailed examples of what to include!

Personal Statement Example: Research Experience 1

“Working on a project on First Lady diplomacy, I discovered that female leaders frequently set a positive and valued example when dealing with international affairs. They actively manage public affairs and advocate for sectors such as international issues, public services and charity. However, their public voices frequently remain underrepresented. This discovery inspired me to research the scope of female influence in developing countries, and I engaged in research examining rural poverty alleviation and construction in Hubei Province, China. Applying quantitative and qualitative techniques, my team and I distributed questionnaires and interviewed local officials during field research on the development of B&Bs in the area. The data analysis we undertook indicated that by empowering women, relative poverty could be alleviated and economic growth boosted. The products created by these women could then be sold to other countries, allowing them to participate in a global value chain. In cooperation with an international non-profit organisation, the local government subsequently explored a path for the employment of rural women in cultural and recreational activities, volunteer services and public affairs, ultimately achieving the goal of developing an effective rural employment policy. Gaining economic autonomy through employment will enable women to enter the public sphere and thus effectively eliminate gender inequalities.”

Commentary and Analysis

This is an excellent paragraph. After the slightly general paragraphs that preceded it, the writer now outlines a well-contextualised and highly relevant piece of academic research. This is exactly the kind of content important in a master’s personal statement. It shows engagement, academic strengths, commitment and a sense of purpose and action.

It’s an impressive account, although I would like to see slightly more content related to the research and analysis skills used, as it is, perhaps, slightly too descriptive of the outcome and not focused enough on how this experience adds to the writer’s suitability for postgraduate study.

Check out lots more examples of personal statements here , and see how they can inspire your application!

Personal Statement Example: Research Experience 2

“However, the questions of how to promote women’s economic autonomy, ensure female independence in the labour market and facilitate global development remain to be addressed. The current labour market model of equal pay for equal work allows corporations to reproduce, generate profit and develop a formal economy but exploits the underprivileged. So why is it that people are so frequently thrown out of this economic development track? My argument is that gender, labour and class are intertwined, and the process of gender socialisation leads to inequality. I believe this is one factor that leads to discussions involving gender issues becoming extreme in nature. Gender is not simply about gender. It requires us to analyse various power relations that are often interactive and fluidly intertwined. By studying this postgraduate course, I hope to identify more clearly the dilemmas associated with gender and power and apply the knowledge gained at Buckley in an increasingly impactful professional context.”

My Commentary and Analysis: 

This paragraph is almost all opinion. It’s informed but not referenced. It would have been far stronger if the writer had used texts or findings to validate their opinions and to show a depth of research knowledge. 

Accurate or compelling as they may be, whilst these arguments do indicate an astute and informed viewpoint, they don’t add enough value to this personal statement. By comparing the views of experts or drawing conclusions from identifiable research, the writer would have added some depth and credibility to their application.

Additionally, whilst there is a reference to the value of the course applied for, there is no real sense of connection made between the writer’s ambitions and the course content. As a consequence, this section is written in a bit of a vacuum. 

A postgraduate personal statement should always clearly indicate how the applicant’s skills, experiences or ambitions make them suitable for specific aspects of the course being applied for, and there’s no evidence of this here.

The one thing that all successful personal statements have in common is that they are concise, engaging and accurate in spelling, punctuation and grammar. Consequently, I always recommend Grammarly to my students and clients. 

It’s an outstanding tool for ensuring your personal statement is rich with detail whilst hitting those all-important word limits. Check out the free version of Grammarly here , or hit the banner for more information.

Personal Statement Example: Conclusion

“I believe that women should be involved in global value creation as subjects, not as invisible objects, and that everyone has the freedom to develop into the person they are capable of becoming. Consequently, I plan to work for international organisations such as UNDP or UN Women in the short term. My goal is to focus on female employment in the context of global integration and promote economic development through gender equality. Having developed the networks and experience required in this sector, I intend to establish my own NPO to empower women and facilitate gender equality. I expect to take a more open and multidimensional view of gender, challenge views and concepts that are taken for granted and dismantle traditional societal gender stereotypes and the violence they can generate. I am confident that the modules, networks, resources and opportunities your faculty offers represent a critical next step on my personal and professional journey.”

The writer restates their commitment to gender equality and then identifies the steps they plan to take to act on this conviction. This indicates a depth of dedication and ambition, and it’s implied that the master’s course would be of value in achieving these goals. 

However, this connection really needs to be made tangible, and the links between the writer’s ambitions and the ways in which the course will facilitate them made clear. There’s almost no reference at all to the course content in this personal statement example, so the admissions reader just can’t tell if the writer really understands the content and purpose of this postgraduate degree.

The final sentence makes a general reference to the course, but this is nowhere near enough.

In summary, this personal statement example gives the impression of a dedicated and committed applicant who has some tangible academic experience. However, this is really just a manifesto of opinion and vision, and not an informed personal statement. 

It doesn’t make connections with the course, show a range of skills or discuss the value that the applicant might bring to the faculty.

Consequently, it would be hard for an admissions team to make this applicant an offer.

For more great advice, check out my article on writing an excellent final personal statement paragraph here .

Click here or on the banner below to get your free download of this complete personal statement example . 

Whether you’re looking for personal mission statement examples or an example of personal purpose statement, I hope this personal statement example has been helpful. Above all, I wish you every success in your academic career. 

If you’d like to work with me to develop your personal statement 1:1 and write a powerful mission statement, I’d be delighted to hear from you. 

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How to Write a Strong Personal Statement

• Ruth Gotian
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A few adjustments can get your application noticed.

Whether applying for a summer internship, a professional development opportunity, such as a Fulbright, an executive MBA program, or a senior leadership development course, a personal statement threads the ideas of your CV, and is longer and has a different tone and purpose than a traditional cover letter. A few adjustments to your personal statement can get your application noticed by the reviewer.

• Make sure you’re writing what they want to hear. Most organizations that offer a fellowship or internship are using the experience as a pipeline: It’s smart to spend 10 weeks and $15,000 on someone before committing five years and $300,000. Rarely are the organizations being charitable or altruistic, so align your stated goals with theirs
• Know when to bury the lead, and when to get to the point. It’s hard to paint a picture and explain your motivations in 200 words, but if you have two pages, give the reader a story arc or ease into your point by setting the scene.
• Recognize that the reviewer will be reading your statement subjectively, meaning you’re being assessed on unknowable criteria. Most people on evaluation committees are reading for whether or not you’re interesting. Stated differently, do they want to go out to dinner with you to hear more? Write it so that the person reading it wants to hear more.
• Address the elephant in the room (if there is one). Maybe your grades weren’t great in core courses, or perhaps you’ve never worked in the field you’re applying to. Make sure to address the deficiency rather than hoping the reader ignores it because they won’t. A few sentences suffice. Deficiencies do not need to be the cornerstone of the application.

At multiple points in your life, you will need to take action to transition from where you are to where you want to be. This process is layered and time-consuming, and getting yourself to stand out among the masses is an arduous but not impossible task. Having a polished resume that explains what you’ve done is the common first step. But, when an application asks for it, a personal statement can add color and depth to your list of accomplishments. It moves you from a one-dimensional indistinguishable candidate to someone with drive, interest, and nuance.

• Ruth Gotian is the chief learning officer and associate professor of education in anesthesiology at Weill Cornell Medicine in New York City, and the author of The Success Factor and Financial Times Guide to Mentoring . She was named the #1 emerging management thinker by Thinkers50. You can access her free list of conversation starters and test your mentoring impact . RuthGotian
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How to Write a Great Personal Statement for the Global MPH

May 15, 2019

Imperial College London’s School of Public Health is renowned for conducting world-class research on today’s most pressing public health issues. No matter how compelling your research findings are, it is essential to communicate them clearly in order to promote positive change.

The same principle applies to your personal statement for the Global Master of Public Health (MPH) program . This personal statement is a chance to make the case that you belong at Imperial. Making that case clearly and effectively can be as important as your academic and professional qualifications.

Many students get anxious about this portion of the application, or worry that their writing skills aren’t up to the task. Our advice? Don’t panic!

You don’t have to be an outstanding writer to craft a great personal statement. Your task is to provide Imperial’s reviewers with the information they’re looking for in 1500 words or less. Let’s break the key points down into three specific areas: your past, present, and future.

1. Past: your background in public health

Start by introducing yourself. You’ve already provided a CV with your application, so this is an opportunity to put your experience in context. Tell us how and why you became interested in public health, the skills you’ve developed, and what you’re most proud of in your studies and career. Don’t be afraid to let your personality shine through!  

Key points:

• Previous academic and professional experience
• Relevant exposures to public health related work and research
• Areas of interest in healthcare and why they interest you

Examples from the MPH Class of 2018-19:

“Throughout my years at University and recent postgraduate studies, I have worked in a pharmacy as a pharmacy/ dispensing assistant, in both community and hospital settings with the latter being involved with cancer clinical trials. These roles have greatly advanced my knowledge of patient care, different treatment options and health awareness strategies within the NHS and local CCGs.”

“I worked on a retrospective study to examine the trends and outcomes of aortic valve replacements performed on veterans from 2005 to 2015. Prior coursework in statistics equipped me to interpret data analyses. I co-authored two abstracts. I often considered how researchers contribute towards reducing health inequities in specific populations.”

2. Present: why you are applying to the Imperial College MPH

After you’ve introduced yourself, explain your motivation for your application. What is driving you to take your career in public health to the next level, and why is the Imperial Online MPH right for you? Make a compelling case why you are applying to this program, specifically, and why now is the right time.

• Your motivation for your professional and/or research career in public health
• Why you are applying for the Online MPH program, specifically

Examples from MPH Class of 2018-19:

“My healthcare background has given me the drive to move my career from disease treatment to increasing awareness of disease prevention. With an increasing life expectancy and an uncertain national healthcare budget, prevention of poor health from preventable diseases has never been more imperative.”

“I am particularly interested in studying at Imperial College London due to its Public Health Policy Evaluation Unit, as the research areas of the unit match my own areas of interest for future research which include big healthcare data, healthcare access and health policy; within these areas I have an interest in mental health, cancer and primary and secondary care.”

3. Future: goals for your research at Imperial and your career beyond graduation

Finally, show that you have a specific vision for your time at Imperial and your post-MPH career. Include a short proposal (150 words or less) for a research project that you would be interested in carrying out as part of your dissertation over approximately a three month period. This gives the team more of an idea of your research interests and motivation to undertake the online Global MPH program. If you are accepted, you will not be required to carry out the proposal from your application. If you’d like to pursue the proposal from your application as part of your research portfolio, you can.

Key Points:

• Your future career goals
• Your proposed research area

“I believe the course will be able to provide an opportunity to obtain a more in-depth knowledge within these areas, but also developing a strong theoretical understanding of health policy, epidemiology and research methods, which I will give me the underpinning knowledge to undertake a PhD in Public health evaluation and policy in the future.”

“I aim to perform research to evaluate and improve the effectiveness and accessibility of health services for chronic conditions in low-income communities.”

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One last piece of advice: write an honest statement that gets across your true character and motivations, rather than writing something you think the panel will want to hear. Imperial’s goal in requesting these personal statements is to get to know prospective applicants on a personal level. Focus on providing a clear account of who you are, why you’re applying, and what you plan to do during and after the program.

The Global MPH offers the opportunity to get a world-class graduate degree in public health from one of the top 10 universities in the world (QS World University Rankings 2019). The program is affordable, flexible, and 100% online. As such, it attracts a diverse, highly-qualified group of students from across the globe. With a great personal statement, you can significantly increase your chances of joining the next cohort!  

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by Talha Omer, MBA, M.Eng., Harvard & Cornell Grad

In personal statement samples by word limits.

Writing a 500-word personal statement can be more challenging than writing a 1000-word statement because of the need for brevity without missing out on important information . You have to carefully select and condense your thoughts, experiences, and aspirations into a limited space.

Every word has to count.

It requires focusing on the most essential details relevant to your field of interest , and removing any superfluous information that have no direct relation to your field , which can be a difficult task. It demands a higher level of clarity, conciseness, and focus compared to a longer statement, where you have more freedom to elaborate on your ideas and experiences.

In this article, I will be providing  two samples of 500-word personal statements . These samples werewritten by applicants who were admitted to top schools in the US and Canada.

These examples aim to show how prospective applicants like you can seamlessly weave your passion, skills, and relevant experiences into a compelling narrative that is no more than 500 words long.

In writing these essays, the applicants have drawn upon key insights from a number of my previous writings on personal statements. You are also welcome to use my previous writings to help you write your personal statement.

In those posts I’ve discussed the  art of constructing a captivating personal statement for grad school , and I’ve highlighted the  pitfalls to avoid  to ensure your statement leaves a positive impression.

I’ve also shared valuable tips on  structuring your personal statement  for clarity and readability, not to mention  how to create a powerful opening  that grabs attention from the start. And let’s not forget about maintaining brevity while effectively telling your story, as well as offering a vast range of  personal statement examples  from different fields for reference.

And yes, do not forget to explore my  8-point framework  that anyone can use to self-evaluate their personal statement. Complementing this, I’ve also created a  7-point guide  to help you steer clear of potential traps and missteps in your personal statement.

I encourage you to explore these topics in depth, as they will be useful while we explore the 500-word sample personal statements.

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What Should Be Included in a 500 Word Personal Statement?

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A 500-word personal statement should include a compelling introduction to hook the reader’s attention, followed by a clear explanation of your interest in the field and relevant experiences , skills, and achievements. Avoid including irrelevant information, excessive detail, clichés, negative tone, and repetition. In short, f ocus on pertinent, clear, and genuine experiences that relate directly to your program of interest .

Here’s a guide on what to include:

• Introduction: A strong introduction not only catches the reader’s attention but also sets the tone for the rest of the personal statement. A personal anecdote could be a specific moment or event that sparked your interest in the field you’re pursuing.

A surprising fact could be a unique perspective or understanding that you’ve developed about your field. A statement that outlines your motivation could succinctly express what drives you towards this field or opportunity. The introduction should create curiosity and interest in the reader’s mind to know more about your story.

• Why You’re Interested: Here, you want to establish a clear connection between your interests and the opportunity you’re applying for. This could involve discussing the specific aspects of the opportunity that align with your passion or goals.

For example, if you’re applying for a business program because you’re interested in entrepreneurship, you might discuss specific courses, professors, or opportunities for hands-on learning within the program that excite you.

• Your Qualifications: This section should detail the experiences and skills that make you a strong candidate. For an academic program, you might discuss relevant coursework, projects, or research experience. For a job, you might talk about past roles, responsibilities, and accomplishments.

The key here is to not just list experiences, but to demonstrate how these experiences have equipped you with skills or insights that make you a strong fit for the opportunity.

• Personal Growth: Reflect on the lessons learned from your experiences. For instance, managing a challenging project might have improved your problem-solving skills, or working in a team might have honed your collaboration and communication skills.

This reflection demonstrates your ability to learn from experience and your readiness for future challenges. It also shows self-awareness, which is an attractive trait in any candidate.

• Your Goals and Aspirations: Show the reader that you have a vision for your future, and that the opportunity you’re applying for aligns with this vision. For example, if you aspire to become a software engineer, discuss how a computer science program would equip you with the necessary skills and knowledge. If you hope to work in a specific industry, discuss how the opportunity would provide you with relevant experience or connections.
• Conclusion: The conclusion is your final chance to leave an impression. Summarize your key points—your interest in the opportunity, your qualifications, your personal growth, and your future goals. Restate your excitement about the opportunity, and leave the reader with a sense of your passion, commitment, and suitability for the opportunity.

While writing a 500-word personal statement, it’s important to maximize the impact of every word. Certain things should generally be avoided

Here’s a guide on what NOT to include:

• Irrelevant Information: Do not include experiences or skills that aren’t relevant to the application. It’s crucial to stay focused and pertinent.

For example, i f you’re applying for a Computer Science program, talking at length about your prowess in playing the trombone, without tying it back to skills or experiences relevant to computer science, may not be very helpful.

• Excessive Detail: You have limited space, so avoid overly detailed descriptions of events or experiences. Stick to what’s crucial for your story and purpose. Instead of detailing every single task and responsibility in a previous job, focus on the key responsibilities and achievements that showcase your skills and experiences.
• Clichés and Generalizations: Avoid clichés and general statements. Be specific and personal in your experiences and aspirations to stand out.

Phrases like “I want to save the world” or “I’m a people person” are very generic and don’t tell anything specific about you. Instead, use concrete examples to illustrate these traits.

• Negative Tone: While it’s important to be honest, avoid focusing excessively on negative experiences or failures. If you mention a setback, always connect it to a learning experience or growth.

Rather than dwelling on a low grade in a class, you could discuss how it motivated you to seek extra help, develop better study habits, or explore different learning strategies.

• Repetition: Avoid repeating the same ideas or experiences. It wastes valuable space and might bore the reader. If you’ve already mentioned that you were a leader of a club in college, you don’t need to repeat this fact later in your statement. Each point should contribute something new.
• Excuses: While it’s acceptable to explain extenuating circumstances, avoid making excuses for any shortcomings. Instead, focus on what you’ve learned or how you’ve grown from challenging situations.

Instead of saying “My grades suffered because my professor was terrible,” you could say, “I faced some academic challenges but sought out resources to improve my understanding and raised my grades by the end of the semester.”

• Overly Complex Language: Don’t use unnecessarily complex language or jargon in an attempt to impress. Clarity and genuine expression are most important.

Don’t say, “My magniloquent and erudite nature facilitates my academic pursuits,” when you can simply say, “My love for learning and strong communication skills support my academic success.”

In short, r emember to:

• Stay focused and specific. With only 500 words, every word counts.
• Show, don’t tell. Instead of saying you’re passionate about something, demonstrate it through your actions and experiences.
• Be genuine and authentic. The personal statement is your chance to show who you are beyond your grades or resume.

500 Word Personal Statement Example 1

Two years ago, I saw a massive opportunity in the e-commerce market of Norway. After dedicating months of sleepless nights, I launched an online clothing retail brand. Despite an institutional infrastructure and a development team of young professionals, I failed to sustain growth and was forced to shut down after a few months. I was only 22 years old at that time and lacked the experience to conduct market research, and gauge consumer behavior.

I am a great concept developer, but I lack business acumen. This failure was crucial in helping me carve out my career aspiration and convince me to pursue a degree in business and management with a focus on retail fashion.

After my startup’s failure, I joined Capgemini, where I slowly started to take on managerial responsibilities. As a product manager, I have managed the complete product development cycle of launching new products – from design to branding to customer experience. This versatile experience has enabled me to understand the market dynamics at the grass root level.

The graduate management program at Brock is a perfect fit. The extensive alumni network and emphasis on leadership have made it my natural choice. In addition, Brock’s great collaborative vibe makes you feel part of the community. The program will provide me with the opportunity to combine quantitative experience with sound business and managerial skills. In line with my career goals, my research interest is the global e-commerce fashion industry. I would like to have an in-depth knowledge of how the industry behaves in different countries. I will focus my research on the designer wear industry and its market trends. I am confident that the knowledge and skills I learned through working on a research project on E-Health Marketing and studying Research Methodology at my undergrad institution will also assist me in applying the research skills while working on my thesis.

My multidisciplinary background, and ability to understand an industry’s scientific realms will be imperative to my learning. The collaborative nature of the cohort will challenge me every day. The diverse people from around the world, the work hard play hard attitude, and the faculty will all converge to something outstanding.

After graduating, my immediate goal is to work in Canada for a few years, preferably in the fashion industry. This will allow me to apply my knowledge and taste the flavor of the global professional world. I would aim to serve numerous facets of work by combining my undergraduate and graduate education, ideally in the retail marketing department of a company. Eventually, I aim to return to Norway and fulfil my ambition of setting up a world-class online retail fashion marketplace and make it a success by leveraging the skills I would have developed at Brock through courses such as Consumer Behavior, B2B Marketing, and Services Marketing.

Your personal statement is thoughtful and provides a compelling narrative of your experiences and aspirations. Let’s break it down based on the criteria I provided:

• Introduction (4.5/5): Your intro is intriguing as you directly share your experience of trying to start an online clothing retail brand in Norway. It sets the tone for the rest of the essay.
• Why You’re Interested (4.5/5): You’ve done a good job of explaining why you want to pursue a degree in business and management, focusing on your startup experience.
• Your Qualifications (4/5): Your work experience at Capgemini is detailed and relevant. However, you might want to provide more specifics about your achievements or any impact you made in this role.
• Personal Growth (4.5/5): The reflection on your failed startup and how it shaped your career aspirations is very effective. It shows your ability to learn from failures and to turn them into opportunities.
• Your Goals and Aspirations (4.5/5): Your plans for the future, both in the short and long term, are clear and directly tied to the program you’re applying for.
• Conclusion (4.5/5): The connection between your past experiences, current pursuits, and future goals is well drawn, leaving a strong concluding impression.

Additional points:

• Your reasons for choosing Brock’s graduate management program are well-articulated. The reference to specific courses shows that you’ve done your research.
• The paragraph about your research interests adds depth to your statement, though it might be beneficial to tie this more explicitly to your career goals.
• Some sentences could be tightened or made more concise to keep your statement within the 500-word limit, without losing important content.

Overall, your personal statement is quite strong. It’s clear, engaging, and effectively demonstrates your motivation, experiences, and goals. It shows resilience, ambition, and a clear desire to learn and grow.

• Introduction: The opening is strong. It succinctly introduces your entrepreneurial experience, along with a setback that has clearly shaped your professional aspirations. There is, however, room for added color or detail to make the story more engaging. For example, what was unique about the clothing brand you launched? Did a specific incident or experience lead to its conception?
• Why You’re Interested: You do a good job of outlining your interest in business and management with a focus on retail fashion. The link between your failed startup and your decision to pursue further education in this field is well-made, showing an ability to learn from failures and pivot.
• Your Qualifications: Your experiences at Capgemini sound impressive, but more specifics would enhance this section. For example, were there any significant achievements or impacts from your product management role? Can you quantify the success of the products you launched or share some measurable outcomes of your work?
• Personal Growth: You highlight your self-awareness and willingness to learn. You’re demonstrating an understanding of your strengths and areas for improvement, which shows maturity and self-reflection.
• Why this Program: You show good research into Brock’s graduate management program. Mentioning the alumni network, the emphasis on leadership, and the collaborative environment helps to illustrate why the program is a good fit for you. It might be beneficial to connect these program features more explicitly with your own goals and how they will help you achieve them.
• Your Goals and Aspirations: Your career aspirations are well-articulated and link well with your proposed studies and experiences. It’s great that you’re focusing on a specific industry (e-commerce fashion) and you’ve clearly outlined your future plans. However, you could make it even clearer how exactly the Brock program and its specific courses will help you achieve these specific goals.
• Conclusion: Your conclusion effectively ties together your past experiences, current interests, and future goals. The mention of a “work hard play hard attitude” is a bit unclear, though, and might be better replaced with a more specific statement about your work ethic or approach.

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500 Word Personal Statement Example 2

I have taken all my blessings for granted for most of my life. In a favourable comparison, I realized I was better off than most of my peers. For example, my father had a successful restaurant business in France; I was studying at the best college in Dubai, and most importantly, I was one of the very few who afforded an international education, which I completed in 2021 when I did my Master’s in Supply Chain and Logistics Management (SCLM) from Warwick University.

It wasn’t until after I graduated from SCLM that I realized how much of an advantage I had over my peers. From day one, I had access to a business – an opportunity the majority didn’t have. In this business, I worked with many experts, from food experts to suppliers to clients to app designers. My role was more of a consulting one, which included massive collection and analyses of information. It also included formulating and testing hypotheses and developing and communicating recommendations across all aspects of the restaurant’s supply chain. Unfortunately, however, due to unavoidable personal reasons, I had to move back to Dubai, where I joined Nestle.

While working at Nestle, I observed that many people worked their whole lives to climb the corporate ladder so that they could work on company-wide strategic problems. At the same time, external consultants to Nestle (such as IBM, Accenture, Mckinsey etc.) skip the years of executing day-to-day duties and jump straight to working on and solving these problems. At Nestle, we only work as mediators between the company and the consultants. However, the consultants do the actual chunk of quality work. The quickest way to get into the consulting industry is via a formal degree in Business Consulting. Therefore, the need for this education is of utmost importance to me.

During my interaction with one of Warwick’s graduates, who also happens to work in consulting, I found that IBM and Deloitte Consulting visit Warwick and help students develop consulting skills. Also, I am excited about joining professional networks at Warwick. These will allow me to learn from industry leaders and collaborate with my peers to explore the latest industry practices. I can share my experience of taking bold steps, which reduced food waste by over 70% at the restaurant. Classes in Quantitative Methods and Consulting module will allow me to develop Consulting Expertise and apply quantitative techniques to solving complex problems. Courses such as Leading and Managing Change will hone my soft skills.

I want to make it into strategy consulting by utilizing Warwick’s presence in consulting. Ideally, I want to start a career where I can advise on strategic analysis and commercial negotiations. In the past, I have taken decisions which led to revolutionizing the food waste industry in France. By using the Warwick platform, backed up by a strong alum network, I can fulfil my career goal of becoming a resuscitator of the ailing industries of Dubai.

Your personal statement provides a strong sense of your experiences and ambitions. Here’s a more detailed breakdown based on the criteria:

• Introduction (4.5/5) : Your introduction captures the reader’s attention by creating a contrast between your earlier attitude and your current perspective. This successfully sets the stage for the rest of the personal statement.
• Why You’re Interested (4/5) :: Your interest in business consulting stems from your experiences working in your family’s restaurant and later at Nestle. This context makes your motivations clear and credible. However, you could further elaborate on why business consulting specifically attracts you compared to other professions.
• Your Qualifications (4/5) :: You provide concrete examples of your involvement in your family’s business and your role at Nestle. The anecdote about reducing food waste by 70% at the restaurant is particularly effective. It might be beneficial to give more specific examples of your achievements at Nestle as well.
• Personal Growth (4.5/5) :: The realization of the opportunities and advantages you’ve had in comparison to your peers is a critical turning point. This shows introspection and a willingness to leverage your advantages for the greater good.
• Your Goals and Aspirations (4/5) :: Your goal to work in strategy consulting and make a difference in Dubai’s industries is clear. It would be even more impactful if you could elaborate on why this is important to you. Is there a particular industry or issue you’re passionate about addressing?
• Conclusion (4.5/5) :: You effectively connect your past experiences, current education pursuit, and future goals, leaving a strong concluding impression.
• Your reasons for choosing Warwick are clear and well-researched. Your reference to specific modules and networks demonstrates a deep understanding of what the program can offer.
• There are some lengthy sentences that could be broken down for clarity and readability.
• The last part of your statement could benefit from a summary or a concluding sentence that reinforces your main points.
• Introduction: Your introduction immediately acknowledges the privileged position you’ve had throughout life, creating a contrast to many personal narratives. You offer context by providing details about your father’s business and your international education. However, an engaging anecdote or more personal insights could further draw in the reader.
• Why You’re Interested: You do well to connect your interest in business consulting with your unique experiences in your father’s business and the realization of your advantage. Providing specifics about the tasks and challenges you undertook in the family business could further strengthen this section.
• Your Qualifications: Your work at Nestle and the consulting tasks you performed are compelling. It’s clear you’ve gained experience in the field. However, specific accomplishments or experiences during your time at Nestle would further demonstrate your qualifications and enhance this part.
• Personal Growth: Your experience of observing the different roles and hierarchies within Nestle provides insight into your growth and understanding of the industry. But highlighting what you learned about yourself in these roles, perhaps in terms of skills, attitudes or perspectives, would enhance the demonstration of personal growth.
• Why this Program: Your reasons for choosing the program at Warwick are well-articulated. You’ve done your research and understand how the program’s features align with your career objectives. Including how these features will address your specific needs or fill your skills gap could add depth to this section.
• Your Goals and Aspirations: You articulate your career aspirations clearly, highlighting your desire to enter strategic consulting and your specific interest in commercial negotiations. However, connecting these goals more directly to your past experiences or explaining why these particular goals attract you could make this section more impactful.
• Conclusion: Your conclusion ties your experiences, the program at Warwick, and your career goals together effectively. It leaves a strong impression and demonstrates that you have a clear direction for your future.

The length of a personal statement can vary greatly depending on the requirements of the specific application or organization.

Generally, 500 words is sufficient for a personal statement. It can force you to focus on the most crucial aspects of your story, qualifications, and aspirations, leading to a more precise and compelling narrative.

Admissions committees often review hundreds of personal statements, and their time for each one is limited. On average, they may only spend about three minutes per essay. It is therefore imperative that you respect their time and keep your statement concise and impactful. Avoid long-winded narratives that do not contribute significant value to your application.

Remember, the objective is to deliver as much meaningful information as possible in a condensed form. Extraneous details that do not directly support your candidacy can detract from the effectiveness of your statement. Equally important is to engage the reader; a monotonous, unexciting statement could be easily forgotten amidst a sea of applications. Strive to make your personal statement not only informative but also compelling, to stand out in the minds of the committee members.

The amount of time it takes to write a 500-word personal statement can vary greatly depending on several factors: your familiarity with the subject, your writing skills, the amount of planning you’ve done, and the number of revisions you intend to make.

On average, writing a 500-word personal statement takes 15-20 hours of focused time and effort.

The process of writing a personal statement can be divided into several stages, each requiring a portion of the total time. Here’s a possible breakdown of the 15-20 hours:

• Brainstorming and Planning (3-4 hours): During this stage, you’ll think about your experiences, skills, and goals, and how they align with the opportunity you’re applying for.
• Drafting (4-5 hours): Once you have a clear plan, you can start writing your statement. This stage involves translating your ideas into a coherent narrative.
• Revising (6-8 hours): This is usually the most time-consuming stage. You’ll need to review your statement, making changes to improve its content, structure, clarity, and style. It’s a good idea to have others review your statement and provide feedback during this stage.
• Proofreading and Finalizing (2-3 hours): Finally, you’ll proofread your statement carefully to catch any errors and make final adjustments.

It’s advisable to start early to give yourself plenty of time to revise and polish your statement. Remember, a strong personal statement can be a key component of your application, so it’s worth investing the time to make it as good as it can be.

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Life has been a struggle at times. However, my motivation, determination, and passion for education and my community’s development have remained uncompromised factors that push me to go beyond my limits, enabling me to pursue and achieve my dreams. Along this challenging journey, I have exercised emotional intelligence, allowing me to persevere and ensure that I stay on the path towards my desired career in sustainable development.

From a young age, I have felt an unwavering passion for volunteerism, community service, and contributing back to society in a sustainable way. This zeal has always propelled me to offer my services in finding practical solutions to the problems that exist within my community. Each time issues are identified, whether in urban , peri-urban, or rural areas, I actively collaborate with local leaders and nonprofit organizations to carry out interventions that relieve community dwellers from destitution and create lasting change. Through my extensive experience of over three years, providing voluntary services to diverse communities, my interest in the development sector has grown exponentially, motivating me to pursue sustainable development as my career path.

As a communication graduate, I initially embarked on a career in journalism , writing articles and pieces for various print and broadcast media outlets. However, my unwavering passion to lead change in my society and a deep desire to work towards making life better for everyone have driven me towards humanitarian and non-profit activities. The realization that my skills could be better utilized in creating sustainable interventions to address societal challenges has led me to seek opportunities in the field of sustainable development.

My vision is to contribute to the transformation of my society through sustainable interventions that facilitate positive change in the lives of vulnerable populations and achieve the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) set for 2030. In my community, numerous challenges persist, but there is a lack of individuals equipped with the necessary skill sets to critically analyze and devise sustainable solutions. Frequently, community interventions lack longevity, are misdirected, and eventually abandoned by beneficiaries due to their unsustainability.

By accepting my application to participate in this course, you would provide me with the opportunity to build my capacity as a sustainable development specialist, enabling me to bring about transformative change in my society. Furthermore, this opportunity would empower me to promote the achievement of the SDGs in Liberia by educating nonprofit organizations, citizens, and other key stakeholders on their roles in implementing the strategic global development agenda within the country. With the knowledge and skills gained from this course, I will be better equipped to support the creation of sustainable solutions and empower local communities to drive their own development.

In conclusion, my personal journey has been shaped by a deep-rooted passion for education, community development, and sustainable change. Through my commitment to volunteerism, collaboration with local leaders and nonprofit organizations, and my pursuit of a career in sustainable development, I aim to contribute to the alleviation of societal challenges in my community and the achievement of the SDGs. I am excited about the prospect of participating in this course, as it will not only enhance my understanding and competence in sustainable development but also enable me to serve as an advocate, educator, and change agent in promoting sustainable practices and initiatives within my country.

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The Complete Guide to Creating a Leadership Development Plan

July 31, 2024

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You've probably heard the infamous quote from NFL coach Vince Lombardi, " Leaders aren't born, they are made . And they are made just like anything else, through hard work ."

At this point it may be a bit of a cliche, but it's a true cliche.

One of the most effective ways to guarantee that you have good leaders helping to guide your organization to success is by making those leaders yourself.

Enter the often overlooked leadership development plan.

We're getting into the nitty gritty of what makes a successful leadership development plan and how you can use the framework to transform some of your most valuable employees into leaders whose leadership styles align with your company's mission and drive growth.

What is a Leadership Development Plan?

A leadership development plan is a framework designed to enhance an employee's leadership skills, competencies, and abilities. The structured plan typically includes specific goals, strategies, and activities aimed at fostering growth in leadership capabilities.

How do companies benefit from a leadership development program?

A leadership development program is an invaluable tool that benefits everyone involved. Companies who dedicate the time and resources to creating and supporting these programs see their investment returned to them tenfold. Here are a few common benefits of building a program designed to help improve leadership skills.

Tailored leadership styles

Every leadership style is not suited to every company culture. With leadership training, you can nurture leadership skills that will be most effective within your organization and align with your overall business strategy.

Talent retention

Employees are more likely to stay with a company that invests in their professional development. A successful leadership development plan can enhance job satisfaction and reduce turnover rates.

Moreover, putting in the work to build an effective leadership team benefits those who aren't on track to become a manager. 75% of people agree that the most stressful aspect of their job is their immediate boss. If you take away that relational strain by curating a team of ridiculously efficient and likable leaders, you'll see an increase in employee retention rates.

Increased employee engagement

Employees who see a clear path for career advancement and development within the company are more engaged and motivated to contribute to your organization's success.

Again, the effort you put into developing great managers isn't just helpful for those going into a leadership position. Those strong leaders will be the ones helping to keep employees engaged and productive over the long haul. (We love a good win-win.)

Positive company culture

Ongoing leadership development fosters a positive and inclusive company culture where employees feel supported in their professional growth.

And again, creating great leaders is good for everyone who is impacted by the company culture.

(Are you seeing a theme? When you create a leadership development program you are building a better company for every single employee .)

Strong leadership pipeline

As leadership positions become available, you won't waste precious time or resources trying to fill them. You'll have a steady stream of effective leaders who are available and ready to step into a management role. This is incredible for business continuity and overall organizational performance.

Stronger company brand

Companies known for their strong leadership development programs may have a better reputation in their industry. This helps them attract top talent who are looking to work in organizations that will invest in their leadership development journey.

Cost savings

Creating and following through on a leadership development plan is a significant investment that may deter some companies from going down that route. Outside of costs like seminars, learning materials, and leadership courses, there are hidden costs associated with a dip in productivity as employees spend less time on their direct tasks and more time on long-term skill development.

However, viewing leadership development as too expensive to implement is a short-sighted outlook that can do more harm than good.

Ultimately, the initial investment in internal leadership development training can be more cost-effective than hiring external candidates. External hires cost an average of 18% more than internal hires.

They're also 21% more likely to leave your company within the first year and may even do some damage to your company culture during their short tenure.

The 6 Steps of an Effective Leadership Development Program

A good leadership development plan doesn't actually start with a plan. Before you jump into scheduling online training and one-on-one mentoring, you need to assess how to invest in leadership development in order to meet your organization's long-term goals.

Let's break down how to build a successful program, step-by-step.

1. Evaluate where your company is and where you want it to be

Conduct an assessment to identify leadership needs and gaps within the company using surveys, interviews, and performance data. Current employees are key in this first step; given the chance, many will be able to pinpoint where leadership skills are lacking and could be improved upon.

2. Determine leadership development goals

Setting leadership development goals provides a clear direction and focus for what you want your leadership program to achieve. Goals can be used to measure progress and keep each leadership development plan in line with your overall organizational objectives.

Because you've already determined where your organization is and where you want it to be, you can set goals that move the needle toward that future vision.

3. Determine key leadership competencies

Leadership competencies are skills, traits, and behaviors that make someone an effective leader.

There isn't one concrete list of key leadership competencies that applies to every business and industry. What Company A needs from people in leadership roles will be different from what Company B needs. Therefore, it's up to your organization to determine what makes a great leader.

Here are some common competencies you may determine are necessary:

• Social intelligence (an awareness of how to act in various social settings)
• Emotional intelligence (an ability to understand other peoples' emotions)
• Strong communication skills
• An inclusive attitude
• High ethical and moral standards
• Specific technical skills
• Openness to new ideas
• Engages in continuous learning opportunities
• Coaching ability
• Being conscientious and courteous of others
• Encourages growth
• Consistently demonstrates personal responsibility

4. Select participants

You don't just need a framework for your leadership training, you also need a framework to select people who will participate in your leadership training. Not every employee has leadership potential, and not all potential leaders are interested in career growth that involves moving into management and leadership roles.

You can use metrics such as performance evaluations and feedback from supervisors to identify high-performing employees who may succeed as future leaders. You may also allow managers and supervisors to nominate employees who they believe have strong leadership potential.

Employee recognition software may be helpful in identifying which people on your team are consistently being recognized for their stellar performance. For example, with Terryberry, managers are able to see who receives the most recognition on their team, the last time each team member was recognized, and which categories of recognition are being used.

Leadership qualities can't be the only determining factor of who is suited for your leadership program. Speak with potential employees to discuss what career vision they have for themselves. Individuals whose goals align with your program's objectives will be more motivated to engage fully.

Once you have a list of candidates, assess each one based on the key leadership competencies you determined in step 3. A rubric can be used to evaluate employees subjectively.

5. Create individualized leadership development plans

Every participant in your leadership program needs an individual leadership development plan that targets the key competencies and leadership skills you think they need to further develop.

This is best accomplished with the support of a trusted mentor or coach who can help identify areas for improvement and suggest activities and goals that would truly be beneficial, based on their years of experience.

Key components of an effective leadership development plan include:

• clear, measurable, and achievable leadership goals
• specific development activities such as programs, workshops, mentorship, coaching, on-the-job experiences, and reading relevant literature and research
• an action plan that includes a timeline and small milestones to track progress
• a list of resources needed to complete the development plan such as time, budget, training materials, and mentorship support
• criteria and methods for evaluating progress toward the goal, which could include feedback sessions, performance reviews, and self-assessment

6. Assess and adjust as needed

Adjust your plans

A leadership development plan isn't written in stone. As they complete their training, participants may find that certain activities aren't helping them develop the leadership skills they are striving to target. They may need to adjust their timeline.

Some mentee/mentor relationships may harm instead of help, necessitating a rematch. You can't be afraid to pivot in order to maximize the impact of each leadership development plan.

Adjust your program

The only way to improve is to constantly consider what works and what needs adjusting. Solicit feedback from current employees who are participating in the program about what they've found beneficial and what they would change for future leaders who will go through the program.

If you don't already have a leadership program, then you probably have a defined date in mind as to when you want to launch, but there shouldn't be an end date for the program. Leadership development is an ongoing process, and as employees graduate from the program, you need to choose new participants if you want to support the long-term goals and vision of your company.

Sample leadership development plan template

Below is a sample leadership development plan template that includes all of the components we covered above. Tweak it as needed in order to create leadership development plans that you can implement with your employees.

Department:

Self-assessment

Key strengths:

Areas for improvement:

Leadership development goals

Short term goals (next 6-12 months)

Long term goals (next 1-3 years)

Action plan

Description

Resourced needed

Support and resources

Contact information:

Training program

Published resources (books/articles/websites)

Milestones and evaluation plan

Milestone 1:

Milestone 2:

Milestone 3:

Evaluation criteria 1:

Evaluation criteria 2:

Evaluation criteria 3:

Reviews and feedback

Quarterly review

Annual review

HR Representative

Common Challenges of a Leadership Training Program + Tips to Overcome Them

No successful initiative comes without a few bumps in the road. Here are some issues you might have to contend with and suggestions for an easy resolution.

Customization vs. standardization

There is a delicate balance between consistency and addressing specific needs. You have to find it.

Solution : Create a flexible and personal leadership development plan that can be adapted to different contexts while maintaining core principles.

Securing leadership buy-in

Implementing a leadership development program isn't possible without support from senior leadership. If you're not part of the C-suite, you may dread having a conversation about the need for a leadership program.

Solution : Focus on the data. Point out how the program will support your company's mission and vision. Include evidence from other successful leadership programs and highlight the cost of inaction.

Measuring effectiveness

Without specific metrics that evaluate the effectiveness of your leadership program, it's easy to fall into the trap of subjectively looking at it based on how you feel about the program.

Solution : Set concrete criteria to assess the effectiveness of your program and make informed decisions about its next steps. You can use a mix of quantitative and qualitative metrics, such as pre- and post-assessments, participant feedback, performance improvements, and retention rates.

Balancing work and training

It may be challenging for participants to balance their daily work tasks with the activities they need to complete as part of their leadership development plan.

Solution : Offer flexible learning opportunities such as online modules or part-time workshops. Communicate the importance of the program to managers and ensure they support their employees' participation.

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India can guide developing nations craft maternal, child healthcare strategy: PMNCH's Rajat Khosla

India can guide developing nations craft effective health programmes by sharing its long history of tackling maternal, child, and adolescent health challenges, Rajat Khosla, Executive Director, Partnership for Maternal Newborn and Child Health (PMNCH), said.

India, as one of the prominent leaders of the Global South, can play a crucial role in sharing best practices for improving health outcomes, Khosla in an exclusive interview told PTI.

"The nation's achievements in significantly reducing maternal mortality rates (MMR) and effectively implementing the Rashtriya Kishor Swasthya Karyakram (RKSK) across its vast and diverse landscape stand as exemplary models for other countries," Khosla said.

India's MMR declined from 384 in 2000 to 97 in 2020, whereas the global MMR came down from 339 in 2000 to 223 in 2020.

"This success is attributed to the concerted efforts of the health workers and the effective implementation of multisectoral policies," he said.

Polycrisis (conflict, climate change, and cost-of-living) and increasing complexity of challenges are exacerbating inequities between and within countries, specifically among the fragile (LMICS) states and poorest communities who continue to bear the biggest burden of preventable deaths among women, children, and adolescents, he said.

India like many low- and middle-income countries, or LMICs, faces significant challenges, Khosla said.

However, it has made remarkable progress through initiatives like the Ayushman Bharat scheme, the National Health Mission, and community health programmes like the ASHA initiative.

"India's experience in tackling these challenges can provide invaluable lessons in policy formulation, community engagement, and sustainable health interventions. By sharing its strategies, India can guide other developing nations in crafting effective health programmes that cater to diverse populations," Khosla said.

PMNCH has a long history and relationship with the Indian government.

In addition to being one of its long-standing partners, India has been instrumental in PMNCH's genesis as a global alliance that brought together 80 organisations belonging to three partnerships focused on safe motherhood and newborn health and their survival, Khosla said.

The 'Delhi Declaration,' a landmark statement developed in 2005 in New Delhi, outlined the vision and goals of the new partnership, which came to ultimately be known as the PMNCH.

India's endorsement of the 'Adolescents and the Adolescent Well-being Framework,' alongside 29 global champions in an open letter in the BMJ, are just some examples of their support, he said.

As PMNCH approaches its 20th anniversary, its priorities include accelerating progress towards the 2030 Sustainable Development Goals, enhancing political advocacy, and mobilising resources for maternal, newborn, child and adolescent well-being, Khosla said.

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In today’s interconnected world, having a resume that appeals to a global audience is more important than ever.

Whether you’re aiming for an international role or working in a multicultural environment, tailoring your resume to have global appeal can significantly enhance your chances of landing your dream job.

Here are some key strategies to help you create a resume that stands out on the global stage.

Use the correct format

The format of your resume can vary greatly depending on the country and industry you’re targeting.

In the United States, a chronological format is common, focusing on work history in reverse order, however, in many European countries, a functional or skills-based resume is preferred, which highlights your skills and competencies over your job titles.

Research the standard resume formats in the country you’re applying to and be sure to adapt your resume accordingly.

For instance, in Germany, it’s typical to include a professional photo and personal information at the top of your resume, while in the UK, personal photos are generally avoided.

Using the correct format demonstrates your attention to detail and your respect for the local business culture.

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Research the cultural norms, business etiquette, and resume expectations of the country where you’re applying. This includes knowing what to include in your resume and what to avoid.

For example, some countries may value detailed descriptions of your educational background and qualifications, while others may prioritize professional achievements and work experience.

In Japan, resumes often include personal interests and hobbies to give employers a sense of your personality, whereas in the US, such details are typically omitted.

In Australia, the job search process often involves highlighting relevant work experience and achievements directly related to the job description, with a strong focus on alignment with the role’s requirements.

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Employers value candidates who can navigate and contribute to a multicultural work environment – highlighting your cultural understanding and ability to work with diverse teams can easily set you apart.

Include examples of how you’ve successfully managed cross-cultural projects or worked with international teams.

If you’ve participated in cultural training programs, international business courses, or have experience living abroad, make sure to mention these in your resume.

This shows that you’re not only aware of cultural differences but also capable of bridging them, which is a highly desirable trait in today’s global job market.

Highlight your language skills

Language skills are a valuable asset in the global job market. Fluency in multiple languages not only enhances your ability to communicate but also demonstrates your cultural adaptability.

Clearly list the languages you speak and your proficiency level in each, and if you have certifications or have taken formal language courses, be sure to include these credentials.

Additionally, provide examples of how you’ve used your language skills in a professional context, such as translating documents, conducting business negotiations, or managing multilingual teams.

Highlighting your language proficiency can make you a more attractive candidate for international roles.

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Employers often seek candidates with a proven track record of working in international settings, so if you have experience working abroad, make sure to highlight this in your resume.

Detail the countries you’ve worked in, the nature of your roles, and the achievements you accomplished during your time there.

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This demonstrates your ability to thrive in diverse environments and manage the complexities of international business.

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Clearly stating your eligibility to work in the country can streamline the hiring process and make you a more appealing candidate.

If you already have a work visa or permanent residency, mention this on your resume, and if you’re in the process of obtaining a visa or require sponsorship, it’s beneficial to state this as well.

Being upfront about your visa status helps employers understand your situation and consider the logistics involved in hiring you.

Writing a resume with global appeal involves understanding and respecting the diverse expectations of international job markets.

By using the correct format, researching the country, showcasing your cultural understanding, highlighting your language skills, and including your visa status, you can create a resume that resonates with global employers.

These strategies will help you stand out in a competitive international job market and increase your chances of securing your desired role.

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FACT SHEET: Biden- ⁠ Harris Administration Announces New AI Actions and Receives Additional Major Voluntary Commitment on   AI

Nine months ago, President Biden issued a landmark Executive Order to ensure that America leads the way in seizing the promise and managing the risks of artificial intelligence (AI). This Executive Order built on the voluntary commitments he and Vice President Harris received from 15 leading U.S. AI companies last year. Today, the administration announced that Apple has signed onto the voluntary commitments, further cementing these commitments as cornerstones of responsible AI innovation. In addition, federal agencies reported that they completed all of the 270-day actions in the Executive Order on schedule, following their on-time completion of every other task required to date . Agencies also progressed on other work directed for longer timeframes. Following the Executive Order and a series of calls to action made by Vice President Harris as part of her major policy speech before the Global Summit on AI Safety, agencies all across government have acted boldly. They have taken steps to mitigate AI’s safety and security risks, protect Americans’ privacy, advance equity and civil rights, stand up for consumers and workers, promote innovation and competition, advance American leadership around the world, and more. Actions that agencies reported today as complete include the following: Managing Risks to Safety and Security: Over 270 days, the Executive Order directed agencies to take sweeping action to address AI’s safety and security risks, including by releasing vital safety guidance and building capacity to test and evaluate AI. To protect safety and security, agencies have:

• Released for public comment new technical guidelines from the AI Safety Institute (AISI) for leading AI developers in managing the evaluation of misuse of dual-use foundation models. AISI’s guidelines detail how leading AI developers can help prevent increasingly capable AI systems from being misused to harm individuals, public safety, and national security, as well as how developers can increase transparency about their products.
• Published final frameworks on managing generative AI risks and securely developing generative AI systems and dual-use foundation models. These documents by the National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) will provide additional guidance that builds on NIST’s AI Risk Management Framework, which offered individuals, organizations, and society a framework to manage AI risks and has been widely adopted both in the U.S. and globally. NIST also submitted a report to the White House outlining tools and techniques to reduce the risks from synthetic content.
• Developed and expanded AI testbeds and model evaluation tools at the Department of Energy (DOE). DOE, in coordination with interagency partners, is using its testbeds to evaluate AI model safety and security, especially for risks that AI models might pose to critical infrastructure, energy security, and national security. DOE’s testbeds are also being used to explore novel AI hardware and software systems, including privacy-enhancing technologies that improve AI trustworthiness. The National Science Foundation (NSF) also launched an initiative to help fund researchers outside the federal government design and plan AI-ready testbeds.
• Reported results of piloting AI to protect vital government software.  The Department of Defense (DoD) and Department of Homeland Security (DHS) reported findings from their AI pilots to address vulnerabilities in government networks used, respectively, for national security purposes and for civilian government. These steps build on previous work to advance such pilots within 180 days of the Executive Order.
• Issued a call to action from the Gender Policy Council and Office of Science and Technology Policy to combat image-based sexual abuse, including synthetic content generated by AI. Image-based sexual abuse has emerged as one of the fastest growing harmful uses of AI to-date, and the call to action invites technology companies and other industry stakeholders to curb it. This call flowed from Vice President Harris’s remarks in London before the AI Safety Summit, which underscored that deepfake image-based sexual abuse is an urgent threat that demands global action.

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• Released a guide for designing safe, secure, and trustworthy AI tools for use in education. The Department of Education’s guide discusses how developers of educational technologies can design AI that benefits students and teachers while advancing equity, civil rights, trust, and transparency. This work builds on the Department’s 2023 report outlining recommendations for the use of AI in teaching and learning.
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• Issued a report on federal research and development (R&D) to advance trustworthy AI over the past four years. The report by the National Science and Technology Council examines an annual federal AI R&D budget of nearly $3 billion.
• Launched a $23 million initiative to promote the use of privacy-enhancing technologies to solve real-world problems, including related to AI.  Working with industry and agency partners, NSF will invest through its new Privacy-preserving Data Sharing in Practice program in efforts to apply, mature, and scale privacy-enhancing technologies for specific use cases and establish testbeds to accelerate their adoption.
• Announced millions of dollars in further investments to advance responsible AI development and use throughout our society. These include $30 million invested through NSF’s Experiential Learning in Emerging and Novel Technologies program—which supports inclusive experiential learning in fields like AI—and $10 million through NSF’s ExpandAI program, which helps build capacity in AI research at minority-serving institutions while fostering the development of a diverse, AI-ready workforce.

Advancing U.S. Leadership Abroad President Biden’s Executive Order emphasized that the United States lead global efforts to unlock AI’s potential and meet its challenges. To advance U.S. leadership on AI, agencies have:

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• Developed guidance for managing risks to human rights posed by AI. The Department of State’s “Risk Management Profile for AI and Human Rights”—developed in close coordination with NIST and the U.S. Agency for International Development—recommends actions based on the NIST AI Risk Management Framework to governments, the private sector, and civil society worldwide, to identify and manage risks to human rights arising from the design, development, deployment, and use of AI. 
• Launched a global network of AI Safety Institutes and other government-backed scientific offices to advance AI safety at a technical level. This network will accelerate critical information exchange and drive toward common or compatible safety evaluations and policies.
• Launched a landmark United Nations General Assembly resolution . The unanimously adopted resolution, with more than 100 co-sponsors, lays out a common vision for countries around the world to promote the safe and secure use of AI to address global challenges.
• Expanded global support for the U.S.-led Political Declaration on the Responsible Military Use of Artificial Intelligence and Autonomy.   Fifty-five nations now endorse the political declaration, which outlines a set of norms for the responsible development, deployment, and use of military AI capabilities.

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Iowa Brain-Behavior Modeling Toolkit: An Open-Source MATLAB Tool for Inferential and Predictive Modeling of Imaging-Behavior and Lesion-Deficit Relationships

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The traditional analytical framework taken by neuroimaging studies in general, and lesion-behavior studies in particular, has been inferential in nature and has focused on identifying and interpreting statistically significant effects within the sample under study. While this framework is well-suited for hypothesis testing approaches, achieving the modern goal of precision medicine requires a different framework that is predictive in nature and that focuses on maximizing the predictive power of models and evaluating their ability to generalize beyond the data that were used to train them. However, few tools exist to support the development and evaluation of predictive models in the context of neuroimaging or lesion-behavior research, creating an obstacle to the widespread adoption of predictive modeling approaches in the field. Further, existing tools for lesion-behavior analysis are often unable to accommodate categorical outcome variables and often impose restrictions on the predictor data. Researchers therefore often must use different software packages and analytical approaches depending on whether they are addressing a classification vs. regression problem and on whether their predictor data correspond to binary lesion images, continuous lesion-network images, connectivity matrices, or other data modalities. To address these limitations, we have developed a MATLAB software toolkit that supports both inferential and predictive modeling frameworks, accommodates both classification and regression problems, and does not impose restrictions on the modality of the predictor data. The toolkit features both a graphical user interface and scripting interface, includes implementations of multiple mass-univariate, multivariate, and machine learning models, features built-in and customizable routines for hyper-parameter optimization, cross-validation, model stacking, and significance testing, and automatically generates text-based descriptions of key methodological details and modeling results to improve reproducibility and minimize errors in the reporting of methods and results. Here, we provide an overview and discussion of the toolkit features and demonstrate its functionality by applying it to the question of how expressive and receptive language impairments relate to lesion location, structural disconnection, and functional network disruption in a large sample of patients with left hemispheric brain lesions. We find that impairments in expressive vs. receptive language are most strongly associated with left lateral prefrontal and left posterior temporal/parietal damage, respectively. We also find that impairments in expressive vs. receptive language are associated with partially overlapping patterns of fronto-temporal structural disconnection, and that the associated functional networks are also similar. Importantly, we find that lesion location and lesion-derived network measures are highly predictive of both types of impairment, with predictions from models trained on these measures explaining ~30-40% of the variance on average when applied to data from patients not used to train the models. We have made the toolkit publicly available, and we have included a comprehensive set of tutorial notebooks to support new users in applying the toolkit in their studies.

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Clinical Advancement Forecasting

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Choosing which drug targets to pursue for a given disease is one of the most impactful decisions made in the global development of new medicines. This study examines the extent to which the outcomes of clinical trials can be predicted based on a small set of longitudinal (temporally labeled) evidence and properties of drug targets and diseases. We demonstrate a novel statistical learning framework for identifying the top 2% of target-disease pairs that are as much as 4-5x more likely to advance beyond phase 2 trials. This framework is 1.5-2x more effective than an Open Targets composite score based on the same set of evidence. It is also 2x more effective than a common measure for genetic support that has been observed previously, as well as in this study, to confer a 2x higher likelihood of success. Utilizing a subset of our biomedical evidence base, non-negative linear models resulting from this framework can produce simple weighting schemes across various types of human, animal, and cell model genomic, transcriptomic, proteomic, and clinical evidence to identify previously undeveloped target-disease pairs poised for clinical success. In this study we further explore: i) how longitudinal treatment of evidence relates to leakage and reverse causality in biomedical research and how temporalized evidence can mitigate common forms of potential biases and inflation ii) the relative impact of different types of features on our predictions; and iii) an analysis of the space of currently undeveloped, tractable targets predicted with these methods to have the highest likelihood of clinical success. To ease reproduction and deployment, no data is used outside of Open Targets and the described methods require no expert knowledge, and can support expansion of lines of evidence to further improve performance.

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