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PersonalStatements

A "Personal Statement" is an important vehicle through which you introduce yourself to a third party for a specific purpose - enrolling in a graduate school, applying for a scholarship, seeking an internship opportunity, or applying for a job. To write a good Personal Statement, the skills required are as delicate as creating Coffee Art - and practice makes perfect! The following sections will introduce key qualities of good Personal Statements. The recommended links provide both practical and user-friendly tips, samples/templates, and textbook resources on writing Personal Statements (i) for Academic Purposes; and (ii) for Career Purposes.

Essentials for Personal Statements

Effective Personal Statements can open the door to an interview, selection for admission to graduate schools, or even help you to secure a scholarship – but just remember "COFFEE ART"

Recommended Links for Personal Statements

• Brainstorming ideas Resources – from University of Winsconsin-Madison
• Outlining a Personal Statement – from Fullbright Scholarship Application
• Do's and Don'ts of Personal Statements (With Attribute Map, Accomplishment and Experience Table from from DePaul University.
• Foci for Your Personal Statements - from University of Indiana Bloomington
• Analysis of a Personal Statement Example
• Tips for Writing Oxbridge Personal Statements Tips for Writing Oxbridge Personal Statements
• 4 Top Tips to Show Difference

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「外物之味，久則可厭；讀書之味，愈久愈深。」

——（宋）程頤

「書就是風。讀了很多書，大風就來了。你像風箏，順勢而起，便往天空遠處飛去，讀越多，風越大；飛得越高，看得越遠。」

——台灣資深編輯傅月庵

「書山有路勤為徑，學海無涯苦作舟。」

「立身以立學為先，立學以讀書為本。」

——（宋）朱熹

「善讀者日攻、日掃。攻則直透重圍，掃則了無一物。 」

——（清）鄭燮

「（任何一個人，都必須養成自學的習慣，即使是今天在學校的學生，也要養成自學的習慣，因為遲早總要離開學校的！）自學，就是一種獨立學習，獨立思考的能力。行路，還是要靠行路人自己。」

——數學家華羅庚

「敏而好學，不恥下問 。」

——《論語

「喜愛讀書，就等於把生活中寂寞無聊的時光換成巨大享受的時刻。」

——孟德斯鳩

「讀書應自己思索，自己做主。」

——魯迅

「善學者盡其理，善行者究其難。 」

——荀子

「人若志趣不遠，心不在焉，雖學無成。 」

——（宋）張載

「不要把學問看做是用來裝飾的王冠，也不要把學問看做是用來擠奶的奶牛。」

——托爾斯泰

「遠行要假良朋，數數清於耳目；住止必須擇伴，時時聞於未聞。故雲：「生我者父母，成我者朋友。」親附善者，如霧露中行，雖不濕衣，時時有潤。」

——《溈山大圓禪師警策》

「寫作可以使一天中，工作的二、三小時，化為更有意味的二、三小時。」

——王文興

「寫作，最終是一連串允許你以某些特定方式來表達自己的過程。去創造。去跳躍。去飛翔。去掉落。去發現你自己獨樹一格的敘述方式和堅持；也就是讓你找到內在的自由。」

——Susan Sontag

「有時候我想，天堂一定是一場永不疲倦的閱讀。」

——Virginia Woolf

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How To Write A Personal Statement Letter: A Sample

Have you ever tried impressing somebody that you went to great lengths to get their approval? It’s the same way as writing a personal statement letter.

China Admissions supports international students throughout their application journey. During document preparation, a common question that always pops up is, “how do you write a personal statement letter?”

Before we share our best tips to write an excellent personal statement letter, it’s important that you understand the purpose of this letter and how it can increase your chances of getting accepted into your chosen university.

What is the Purpose of a Personal Statement Letter?

A personal statement letter is a promotional essay about yourself. Sounds so “out there”, right? But it’s true. This kind of letter is a reflective essay that showcases your own interesting story, and why you’re a great candidate to the course/university you’re applying to.

Contrary to what most students believe, admission committees actually scrutinize every applicant’s personal statement letter. Although they consider other credentials, the personal statement letter has weight in identifying worthy applicants.

Best Tips To Write An Excellent Personal Statement Letter

We suggest you write in the format below. Make sure you emphasize the following:

• your background;
• why you want to apply to the program and;
• what you plan to do in the future and how it will help you.

Here’s a sample personal statement letter that you can follow:

Your Name Your Address Date University Name University Address Dear Sir/Madam, (Introduction) My name is <your name> from <your country> and I would like to to apply to the <program> at <your university>. A paragraph introducing your background, academic ability, and discusswhat makes you a strong candidate. A paragraph explaining why you are interested in the program and how you found out about the program. You can also mention people who helped you such as China Admissions or friends in China. Explain what you know about the program and what are the strengths of the program. Show that you’ve done your homework and that you understand the program and university. A paragraph explaining your future plans and career goals, how the program will help you, and what you plan to achieve in the future. (Conclusion) Briefly summarize the content of your letter. Thank the reader for taking the time to review your application (e.g. “I look forward to the opportunity to study at your university.”) Yours sincerely, <Your name and signature> <Your email> <your phone number>

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• All applicants should submit a 400 to 500-word Personal Statement written in English in the " Online System for Applicants of Postgraduate Programmes ". (Please upload under the document type of "Others".)
• In the Personal Statement, you shall state why you are interested in the programme and reasons you find yourself suitable for the programme.
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• print out or email “Confidential Recommendation” (downloadable from “ Online System for Applicants of Postgraduate Programmes ” for referees’ completion and seek referees’ assistance to seal the recommendation and pass it to you. You can then send the sealed recommendation to the Graduate Division of Social Work by post mail;
• print out or email “Confidential Recommendation” (downloadable from “ Online System for Applicants of Postgraduate Programmes ” and seek referees’ assistance to directly send the complete recommendation to the Graduate Division of Social Work by post mail.
• Our postal address is: Room 504, 5/F, T. C. Cheng Building, United College, The Chinese University of Hong Kong, Shatin, N.T., Hong Kong (Attention: Ms. Wong) Please make sure you and your referees bear sufficient postage for your mails. Underpaid mail items shall be returned to the Post Office.
• The Confidential Recommendation could be written in English, traditional Chinese or simplified Chinese.
• Applicants are advised to remind the referees to complete the Confidential Recommendation for submission. The admission documents will be reviewed when the Confidential Recommendations have been submitted.
• Submitting a copy of your graduation certificate/transcript is already regarded as having fulfilled the English Language Proficiency requirements.
• You need NOT submit other proofs such as GMAT/ IELTS/ TOEFL reports, or grade of English subjects at Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination, Hong Kong Higher Level Examination, CUHK Matriculation Examination or Hong Kong Diploma of Secondary Education Examination.
• Please upload the test report of GMAT/IELTS/TOEFL in the “ Online System for Applicants of Postgraduate Programmes ” for our reference and consideration of your application. (Please upload under the document type of "English Test Report".)
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You should upload a personal statement of no more than 1,000 words detailing your interest in applying to the University, the programme(s), etc. You will only be able to submit one personal statement regardless of the number of your programme choice(s). However, if you have indicated interest in our HKU-UCL Dual Degree Programme in Law, a separate personal statement is required.

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Personal Statement 係你用嚟說服Professor 收你嘅文，理應由你自己諗，覺得得有適合嘅內容就寫落去。 一般而言，BU、City 約 600字英文，其他大學約950字係合適嘅長度，你可以按需要加減。 建議使用英文填寫。 如果你申請中文/中文教育之類科目，可以 Bilingual 咁寫。 HKU / CUHK / HKUST / CityU 會提供位置俾你上傳 Personal Statement ， 而其他學校唔要求。 PolyU 需要 PS 嘅科目列表 除以上四間大學外，請喺 Other documents 度上傳（非強制）。

• CityU 表示你必須要填寫 Applicant statement 並於繳交報名時完成，但過後你亦可用 PDF 格式上傳到 Other documents，可以被視為有效。
• 如果您喺同一間學校報多過一科，而學校只容許你提交一份嘅，我地鼓勵按照你嘅 first choice 嚟交。
• 您可使用同一篇 Statement 交到唔同嘅學科/學系，但如果提及學校/課程嘅，請確保您使用官方嘅學校/課程名稱，並請確保你交嘅果間大學係你篇 statement 裡面提嘅大學。建議內容要提及學校及課程，讓 admission 知道你冇交錯。
• 過往有同學無寫仍然收到 Offer。
• 如果你打算寫嘅可以參考以下嘅指引，但如果你決定用其他方法、想後補或者唔想寫嘅，請按自己意思做便可。我地唔會評論話「寫左一定好過唔寫」。
• 即使你報讀嘅學系冇要求，但有可能 Referee 會想睇你嘅 Personal Statement 以決定是否推薦你，所以寫定冇壞。
• ⚠️ 請勿於 @nonjupas 群內詢問 Personal Statement 係咪一定要交 / 可否後補，亦唔好pm admin詢問。
• 亦唔好問「我之前無寫，見到報讀嘅科目派左 Interview，應唔應該補」或者「收到 Interview 應唔應該補」。
• PolyU 嘅大部分科目並唔要求申請人交 Personal Statement / Ref letter。 引述官網FAQ： You NEED NOT submit more documents than required as non-required documents will not be considered by departments. Please check the “Additional Documents Required” section of e-prospectus for the details.

寫文巴 @ugfn1000 有 Personal Statement consultation 服務，以下建議係 2023 年 consult得出嘅要點： (  2024 年版 ) 

睇咗咁多篇personal statement之後，發現8成同學有個通病，就係唔夠personal。記住只有記描抒嘅文章先係personal，論說文一定唔personal。 ❎因為我有好強嘅communication skills所以我適合讀XXX →唔敍事邊個知你有幾強嘅communication skills? ❎我讀咗某某HD/AD，我學識咗XXXX →你交表有寫你讀緊咩，而你啲同學個個都學識咗果樣嘢，點解要收你唔收第二個 ✅我參加咗某某嘅課外活動，每年得15個位，我學識咗XXX ✅我屋企係開XX舖頭嘅，我F6果年暑假去幫手，發現XXX，所以我想讀XXX ✅我去過做義工，某個活動我好深刻，果時得我一個負責XXX

如果你需要人proofread，可以講埋自己報邊間咩科，俾 @ugfn1000 望望，睇睇大路嘢啱唔啱。

只提供寫法指導及一般意見，如果需要太深入意見或落筆評改Grammar，需要酌情收費

Personal Statement常見問題： 問：我啲活動完全唔關事，所以唔知寫咩好。 答：活動唔需要關你果科事，只需要關你性格事。例如你aim finance但活動係去家庭服務中心做義工，你可以寫你因為服務小朋友同老人家而變得十分細心，有利你讀啲要對數字嘅科目。

問：我返啲工同果科冇關，係咪skip咗佢唔寫好啲？ 答：寫part time唔係寫job duties為主，因為都會同人撞，unless你嘅工作係兒子/女兒。寫part time應該集中喺返工某日最深刻嘅經歷，例如有客打爛嘢你點處理等等，所以無關科系嘅工依然可以寫。

問：我中學嘅活動、比賽可唔可以寫？ 答：絕對可以，有幾多人ad/hd有活動啫，唔寫冇嘢寫啦，但小學、幼稚園果啲就真係唔好寫了。

問：我冇參加活動，又冇返part time，你又叫我咪寫讀書學到咩，咁我寫咩好？ 答：寫你成世人最深刻嘅經歷同體會，例如有日你放學返屋企，執紙皮個婆婆突然扭親腰，你叫佢放低啲紙皮去睇跌打仲要陪佢去，佢都唔肯放低啲紙皮，你最後如何解決呢件事。

如果有其他PS相關問題隨時pm我 @ugfn1000 寫好想比我望下都可以pm。只限一般問題，深入意見需酌情收費。

註：可以用嚟參考，唔好抄，唔好拎嚟改，請由頭開始寫起。

As an aspiring computer scientist, I am keen to pursue a degree in Computer Science from the Hong Kong University of Science and Technology. The university’s strong reputation as one of the top institutions to study this field is both inspiring and humbling.

To prepare for this academic journey, I have proactively acquired relevant knowledge, including coding skills, and dedicated time to self-study in areas like mathematics and computer science concepts. In addition, I plan to delve into Computer Science topics like Object-Oriented Programming (OOP) and machine learning, broadening my skills beyond the curriculum.

Participating in extracurricular activities has played a crucial role in my personal development. While my experiences with 3D printing and robotics workshops were valuable, it was working on a drone that sparked my interest in applying scientific principles to develop useful products. This experience ignited a passion for creating applications or even organizing drone performances in the future.

Throughout my academic career, I have developed a passion for understanding how technology operates and works on multiple levels. My studies have provided me with enough knowledge to begin work on coding projects as well as experience working in both Mac OS X and Windows environment. In addition, I have gained exposure with multiple programming languages such as Python, C++, Java, etc. which have helped me build the confidence necessary to continue advancing in the field. 

My goal is to continue enriching my technical skills while also exploring new theories in computer science through research and projects. Participating in various related extracurricular activities, competitions,and hackatons has enabled me to gain further insight into problem-solving approach’s within the discipline, allowing me to experiment more effectively with innovative solutions. 

Upon graduation, I envision myself working as a Software Engineer, engaging in projects, securing internships, and expanding my horizons internationally within five years.

I believe the courses offered by HKUST will help develop my existing strengths and provide the flexibility needed for personal growth within this subject area whereas its practical applications equipped with modern technological resources will allow for independent initiatives leading towards research opportunities that capture my interests deeply. If admitted to your program, I would channel a significant portion of my time into academics, exploring potential collaborations with school projects or competitions to enhance both my academic and practical skills. I believe that pursuing this program is a great fit for me due to its prestige and outreach within Asia Pacific region providing an excellent pathway towards pursuing higher academic goals in future if desired as well. 

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Personal Statement Examples That Show Your Colors

A personal statement is a window into your character, offering a glimpse of your personality, your values, and your vision. By writing one, you can tell your unique story in your own voice, and make a lasting impression that will linger in the minds of those who read it.

In this article, we're providing examples of personal statements that will inspire you and give you a sense of what makes a strong application. With these templates as a guide, you'll feel more confident in your ability to get into top graduate schools. And if you ever need paper help , our service has got your back.

What is a Personal Statement

A personal statement is a narrative that provides insight into who you are as an individual, what drives you, and how your experiences have shaped your goals. Whether you're applying to a university, seeking a scholarship, or vying for a residency spot, your personal statement serves as a key element of your application that can set you apart from other candidates.

At its core, it is your opportunity to communicate your story in a way that resonates with the reader. It lets you go beyond grades and test scores to reveal the motivations, challenges, and passions that define you.

Personal statements often follow prompts or guidelines provided by the institution or organization to which you're applying. However, the most impactful statements are those that creatively respond to these prompts while still maintaining a strong, coherent narrative that ties your past experiences to your future goals.

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The List of Personal Statement Examples

Below is a collection of unique personal statements, each designed to stand out with memorable themes and specific narratives that break away from the ordinary. These examples prepared by our personal statement writing services highlight how to turn your experiences, challenges, and passions into compelling stories that capture the essence of your journey and the vision for your future.

Personal Mission Statement Examples

Title: Building Bridges with Words

My mission is to build bridges—not of steel or stone, but of words, ideas, and connections that bring people together in meaningful ways. I believe that every conversation, every piece of writing, and every interaction is an opportunity to create understanding where there was once division, to spark curiosity where there was once indifference.

From a young age, I've been captivated by the power of language. I saw how a well-crafted sentence could change a mind, how a simple word of encouragement could lift someone's spirit. But I also witnessed how words could be used to hurt, to divide, and to isolate. This duality fueled my desire to harness language for good, to use it as a tool for connection rather than a weapon for division.

In my work, I strive to be a connector—a person who can bring diverse perspectives together, who can translate complex ideas into accessible concepts, and who can find common ground even in the most polarized conversations. I see every challenge as an opportunity to build another bridge, to link people across cultural, ideological, or experiential divides.

My mission extends beyond my professional life. In my personal interactions, I aim to listen deeply, to speak thoughtfully, and to approach every conversation with empathy and openness. I believe that by understanding others, we can better understand ourselves and the world around us.

I am committed to lifelong learning, recognizing that each day brings new opportunities to grow, to learn, and to build more bridges. My mission is not just to achieve personal success but to create a legacy of connection, where the words I choose and the actions I take bring people closer together, fostering a world where understanding, compassion, and unity are the foundation of every bridge we build.

Law School Personal Statement Examples

Title: A Passion for Justice: My Journey to Law School

Growing up in a small town where the law was often seen as distant and impersonal, I witnessed firsthand the devastating consequences of legal injustices. My grandmother, a hardworking immigrant, faced years of discrimination and exploitation in her workplace. Despite her tireless efforts, she was unable to find justice through the legal system. It was this experience that ignited my passion for law and my determination to become a force for positive change.

During my undergraduate studies, I delved deep into legal theory and history, exploring the ways in which the law has been used to uphold and challenge social hierarchies. I was particularly drawn to the intersection of law and social justice, recognizing the power of the legal system to address systemic inequalities.

One summer, I had the opportunity to intern at a public interest law firm specializing in immigration law. There, I worked closely with clients who faced deportation and separation from their families. I learned the immense stress and uncertainty that these individuals endured, and I witnessed the transformative impact that legal representation could have on their lives.

Through my experiences, I have developed a strong commitment to using the law as a tool for social justice. I believe that lawyers have a unique responsibility to advocate for the marginalized and to challenge unjust systems. I am eager to pursue a legal career that will allow me to make a meaningful difference in the lives of others.

I am confident that my academic background, combined with my personal experiences, has prepared me to excel in law school. I am eager to contribute to a diverse and intellectually stimulating learning environment, and I am committed to using my legal education to create a more just and equitable society.

Medical School Personal Statement Examples

If you're seeking exceptional med school personal statement examples, the following template can serve as a valuable starting point.

Title: A Needle's Purpose

The sting of the hypodermic needle, a sensation I've come to know intimately. Not as a patient, but as a volunteer at the local clinic. It's a sensation that simultaneously elicits a pang of fear and a surge of purpose. I recall a particular afternoon when a young boy, no older than ten, was brought in with a severe asthma attack. His wheezing was labored, his eyes wide with terror. As the attending physician administered a nebulizer treatment, I watched, my heart pounding in my chest. When the boy's breathing finally steadied, a sense of relief washed over me. In that moment, I knew that medicine was my calling.

Beyond the clinical setting, I've also had the opportunity to explore the intersection of healthcare and public policy. As a research assistant on a project studying the impact of healthcare reform in my region, I gained a deeper understanding of the systemic challenges facing our healthcare system. This experience has fueled my desire to become a physician who is not only skilled in patient care but also committed to advocating for equitable access to healthcare for all.

My experiences have taught me that medicine is more than just treating diseases; it's about caring for individuals and communities. I am drawn to the challenge of applying my scientific knowledge and clinical skills to improve the lives of others. I am eager to contribute to the medical field and to make a lasting impact on the health and well-being of my patients.

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Personal Statement for Graduate School Examples

Title: From Failure to Fuel

"Failure is not the opposite of success; it's the catalyst that has driven my most significant achievements."

As a psychology undergraduate, I faced a daunting challenge: a research project that yielded unexpected, disappointing results. Initially, I viewed this outcome as a failure, a blemish on my academic record. However, through reflection and guidance from my mentor, I realized that the very unpredictability of research is its greatest strength. This experience sparked an intense curiosity in me, leading to a deeper understanding of the complexities of human behavior and the importance of resilience in the face of adversity.

Rather than shying away from this challenge, I embraced it, using the opportunity to develop a more nuanced approach to research. I delved into advanced statistical methods and honed my ability to think critically about data that didn't conform to expectations. This experience taught me that research is not about finding easy answers but about asking better questions, even when the answers are elusive.

This perspective has shaped my academic journey and fuels my desire to pursue graduate studies. I see my perceived weakness—initially feeling overwhelmed by unexpected results—as a critical strength. It has made me more adaptable, resourceful, and committed to pushing the boundaries of knowledge.

I am eager to bring this mindset to your graduate program, where I can contribute to and learn from a community of scholars who share my passion for psychology. My journey has been defined not by easy successes but by the challenges I've embraced and the growth they've spurred. I am ready to take the next step, confident that my ability to turn setbacks into opportunities will serve me well in the rigorous, rewarding environment of graduate study.

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Personal Vision Statement Examples

Title: In the Space Between Notes

My life's symphony is composed in the spaces between the notes. In music, the rests are as crucial as the melody, defining the rhythm, the pace, and the emotional impact of the piece. I see my life's journey much the same way—not just in the actions I take, but in the pauses, the reflections, and the moments of stillness that allow me to hear the music more clearly.

In the past, I used to focus solely on the crescendo—the big achievements, the high points. I believed that life was a series of grand performances where only the loudest, most spectacular notes mattered. But as I grew, I began to understand that the true beauty of a symphony lies in its balance, in the harmony between sound and silence.

I envision my future as one where I create not just a career, but a life that resonates with this balance. My goal is to become a leader in my field, not by rushing from one achievement to the next, but by being thoughtful in my actions, intentional in my decisions, and open to the unexpected melodies that life offers. I want to lead with empathy, understanding that the quiet moments often speak the loudest, that listening is as powerful as speaking.

In my personal life, I aspire to cultivate deep, meaningful relationships, to be present in the moments that matter most, and to find joy in the simple, unplanned interludes. I seek to live with purpose, but also with grace, allowing myself the freedom to pause, to reflect, and to adapt as the music of my life changes.

Ultimately, my vision is to compose a life that is rich with meaning, where every note and every rest contributes to a harmonious whole. I aim to create a legacy that isn't just remembered for its achievements, but for the way it moved others, for the way it lingered in the spaces between.

Personal Statement Examples for College

The below narrative is one of our unique college personal statement examples you can use as inspiration.

Title: The Art of Folding Paper

I learned more about life from a sheet of paper than from any textbook. My fascination with origami started as a simple hobby, a way to pass the time on rainy afternoons. But as I folded my first crane, I realized I was doing more than just creating art; I was practicing patience, precision, and perseverance.

Origami is deceptively complex. A single wrong fold can distort the entire figure, but with each mistake, I discovered something new. I learned that a wrong fold doesn't mean the end—it's an opportunity to start again, to reshape the paper, and, often, to create something entirely unexpected and beautiful.

In high school, I brought my love for origami into the classroom, using it to explain complex concepts in physics and geometry to my classmates. A paper crane became a lesson in symmetry, a folded frog, an exploration of potential and kinetic energy. I even started an origami club, where we explored the intersection of art and science, creativity and logic. What began as a solitary pursuit transformed into a way to connect with others, to share ideas, and to look at problems from different angles.

Outside of school, origami helped me navigate the challenges of adolescence. When my parents divorced, folding paper became my refuge, a way to process emotions that words couldn't capture. Each fold was a step toward understanding, each completed figure a small triumph of order over chaos. It taught me that even in the most complicated situations, there's a way to create something meaningful if you're willing to keep folding, keep trying.

Now, as I look ahead to college, I see it as a blank sheet of paper—full of possibilities, ready to be shaped by the choices I make and the experiences I seek. I'm eager to bring my passion for both the arts and sciences to your campus, to fold my love for learning into every aspect of my education. Just as I've done with origami, I plan to explore the unexpected intersections, to create something unique and intricate from every opportunity.

In the end, a piece of paper, like life, can be anything you want it to be. It's all in how you fold it.

Residency Personal Statement Examples

Title: The Night I Decided to Stay

Residency wasn't always in the plan. In fact, the night I decided to stay in medicine, I had my resignation letter drafted. I was a third-year medical student, standing alone in a dimly lit hospital hallway, utterly drained from another 30-hour shift. The endless rotations had blurred into a monotonous routine of rounds, notes, and more rounds, and I began to question whether this was truly the life I wanted.

That night, I was assigned to the emergency department, where I met Mrs. Greene, a 67-year-old woman with a history of heart disease. She had collapsed at home and was brought in by ambulance, unconscious and unresponsive. Her family was frantic, desperate for answers I didn't have. As I followed my attending into the room, I felt a wave of anxiety. This wasn't a textbook case; it was a real person whose life hung in the balance.

The resuscitation was intense. I was there, chest compressions, adrenaline injections, the relentless rhythm of the defibrillator. As the team worked, I could see the fear in her daughter's eyes, and it struck me that this was about more than just a medical emergency. This was about a family in crisis, a life teetering on the edge.

After what felt like an eternity, Mrs. Greene's pulse returned. The attending physician calmly directed the team, and we stabilized her enough to move her to the ICU. As we wheeled her away, her daughter grabbed my hand and whispered, "Thank you." It was a simple phrase, but it cut through my exhaustion, through the doubts and the fatigue.

I didn't leave the hospital that night. Instead, I sat down with my resignation letter, re-read it, and then ripped it up. I realized that medicine wasn't just about the science or the protocols—it was about moments like this, moments when you're not just treating a condition, but caring for a person, when your presence and perseverance can mean the difference between despair and hope.

Residency will be grueling, I know that. But I also know that it's where I'm meant to be. The night I decided to stay was the night I realized that medicine isn't just a career; it's a calling. And I'm ready to answer it.

Common App Personal Statement Examples

Title: The Day I Became an Engineer

I became an engineer on a blistering summer afternoon, though I didn't know it at the time. I was eight years old, crouched over the engine of my father's old Ford truck, hands smeared with grease, staring intently at a mess of wires and bolts. The truck had died in the middle of nowhere, miles from home, and with no mechanic in sight, my father turned to me and said, "Let's figure this out."

There was no manual, no diagram, just a young girl and her father armed with determination and a rusty toolbox. The heat was relentless, but I was captivated. Together, we deciphered the puzzle of the engine, tracing wires, testing connections, and slowly piecing together how the machine worked. After hours of trial and error, a spark of understanding ignited within me. When the engine finally roared to life, I felt a surge of pride that was as much about solving the problem as it was about discovering my own potential.

That moment in the desert wasn't just about fixing a truck; it was the first time I understood the power of curiosity and persistence. The feeling of triumph in the face of uncertainty stayed with me, and it became a defining aspect of who I am. It's what led me to join the robotics team in high school, where I spent countless nights debugging code and reassembling circuits, chasing that same spark of understanding.

But engineering, I've come to realize, isn't just about building machines. It's about constructing solutions, piece by piece, for problems that seem unsolvable. Whether I'm designing a new prototype or figuring out how to balance equations in physics, I approach each challenge with the same mindset I had as that eight-year-old in the desert: Let's figure this out.

I'm applying to college not just to learn, but to continue building—ideas, innovations, and a future where no problem is too complex to tackle. I've been an engineer at heart since that sweltering afternoon, and I'm ready to take the next step, not with all the answers, but with the confidence that I can figure them out.

Personal Statement for University Examples

Title: Designing the In-Between

"I've always been fascinated by the spaces between—those fleeting moments when science meets art, where precision meets creativity."

Growing up, I was equally enthralled by the elegance of mathematical equations and the expressive power of a blank canvas. While most saw these as distinct, even opposing interests, I found a profound connection between them. Mathematics, with its rigid structure and logic, offered me a way to understand the world's complexities. Art, on the other hand, gave me the freedom to express the nuances that numbers alone couldn't capture.

In high school, this dual passion led me to an unlikely pairing: architecture. It was in drafting rooms and design studios that I discovered my true calling. Here, the geometric precision of calculus met the boundless creativity of artistic vision, and I found a space where I could truly thrive. Designing structures that were not only functional but also aesthetically compelling was more than a challenge; it was a thrilling pursuit that combined everything I loved.

My projects, often inspired by natural forms and abstract patterns, have taught me to see beyond the obvious, to push boundaries and explore unconventional solutions. In one project, I designed a library that mimicked the flow of water, using mathematical principles to create a space that was both serene and dynamic. This project was a turning point for me, solidifying my belief that the most innovative designs emerge when you allow different disciplines to inform each other.

I believe that the future of design lies in the spaces between—where art and science, creativity and precision, meet. I am ready to contribute my unique perspective and learn from a community that values innovation as much as I do. This program is not just a step in my academic journey; it's the place where I can turn my vision into reality.

Personal Statement for Scholarship Examples

Title: Language as a Bridge

As a child, I watched my parents meticulously fill in forms in a language they barely understood. They had immigrated to this country with dreams of a better life but lacked the resources to fully grasp the complexities of their new world. This experience ignited in me a passion for language—not just as a means of communication, but as a bridge to opportunity.

I began tutoring English as a second language in high school, working with students from diverse backgrounds who, like my parents, struggled with the nuances of a new language. Each session was more than just a lesson; it was an opportunity to empower someone else with the tools they needed to navigate and thrive in society. Through this work, I realized that language is power, and education is the key to unlocking it.

This passion for language led me to pursue a degree in linguistics, where I explored the intricacies of phonetics, syntax, and semantics. I became fascinated by the ways in which language shapes our perceptions and interactions. But I didn't stop at theory—I sought to apply my knowledge practically, volunteering in legal clinics to assist non-English-speaking immigrants with their cases. I translated, I advocated, and most importantly, I listened.

The scholarship I am applying for will enable me to continue this work, allowing me to pursue a graduate degree focused on language acquisition and policy. With this education, I plan to develop programs that not only teach language but also empower individuals to use their voices for change.

My journey has taught me that a blank page is not to be feared—it is a chance to create something meaningful. I am determined to turn every challenge into an opportunity for growth, not just for myself, but for those I am committed to helping. This scholarship would be the next step in my mission to ensure that language is a gateway, not a barrier, to a better life.

The Bottom Line

Remember, your personal statement should be unique to you. Don't try to imitate someone else's style or story. Be honest, be yourself, and let your passion shine through. With careful planning and thoughtful writing, you can create a statement that will help you stand out from the crowd. Meanwhile, check out our separate guide on how to write education on resume —you’ll need it to back up that stellar statement!

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Writing personal statements

Personal statements are a persuasive form of writing that show who you are as a unique individual and why you deserve funding or admission in a way that tells your story. Demonstrating this in a clear, concrete way that is both detailed and concise can help you write a strong personal statement. These statements are commonly used for undergraduate and graduate school applications and scholarship applications. However, these are not used in Tri-Council scholarships.

Questions to Think About Before Writing

• What would the committee want to know about you?
• What would make the committee choose you over another applicant?
• What can you do to stand out positively in the essay?

Strategies for Prewriting

Whether you are writing a personal statement to apply for a scholarship or to an undergraduate or graduate program, each application has specific requirements that requires you to seek out information about the requirements. Make sure you are knowledgeable about the organization to which you are applying. You can do this by checking the website of the sponsoring organization or program and learning about goals and key strengths of the program. Looking at mission statements can be useful in learning more about an organization. You may also want to seek guidance from someone like a faculty advisor.

Strategies for Drafting

Rather than merely summarizing or listing all your experiences, describe a few experiences in detail. Make sure you clearly connect your examples to the values of the organization or program or to your candidacy. Here are some prompts to get you started.

• How does your social identity influence your desire to be involved with this organization?
• What significant, unique experiences have you had (both academic and extracurricular)? What can these experiences help you do?
• What interests and qualifications make you an ideal candidate?
• Why are you drawn to this field?
• Who has inspired you (such as mentors, faculty, and supervisors)?
• If relevant for the application, what can you contribute?

Make sure to include all required information. Try to get all your ideas out in your draft. You can revise the content and writing style later!

Once you have your ideas out, use a logical structure to organize your essay based on your focus. Make sure you have appropriate transitions. Include a strong opening statement in your introduction and a brief conclusion. For example, you could organize it in a storytelling structure that presents your personal experience as a story or by priority of your experiences:

• Your most significant achievement
• Your excellence in the field
• Your dedication to the field
• Your personal characteristics
• Your ability to show initiative, overcome adversity, etc.

Strategies for Revising and Proofreading

Revising is an important step in writing personal statements. Check to see that you carefully describe your experiences and achievements concisely, keeping to word count limitations. Show who you are by using strong verbs and nouns to describe your experiences. Taking time away from your writing can give you a new perspective on it. Seeking feedback from others, especially those in the same field, can give you more insight, too. Consider the following questions when revising your essay:

• Is this essay tailored to this application specifically?
• Is your voice clear in your writing? Do you use vivid word choice?
• Is the writing polished in a way that is appropriate for the organization’s expectations?
• Are you highlighting unique features of your experience, distinguishing yourself from other potential applicants?
• Are you inspiring the committee to invest in you by demonstrating your passion and capabilities?

Additional Writing Tips

• Proofread for punctuation and grammar errors
• Give yourself a lot of time to write and revise
• Prioritize more recent experiences over older ones
• Be specific with your examples
• Use humour sparingly to avoid alienating or offending people
• Vary how you begin sentences—do not always begin with “I” statements
• Read past winning application essays if they are available
• Clichés (such as “I want to help people”)
• Overly flowery language
• Stating something all or most applicants would feel is true
• Repeating phrases unnecessarily
• Broad, generic statements about yourself and your experiences

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