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A successful biology personal statement
University of Southampton admissions tutor, Dr Malcom East, outlines two key ingredients he would like to see evidenced in your biological sciences statement:
You understand something about the course you’re applying for, with a realistic perception of what it involves.
You’re enthusiastic about the subject and can show some commitment to it. You can demonstrate this by writing about your wider reading, Extended Project, work experience or any other way you have engaged with biological science beyond the syllabus.
Your commitment and appetite for the subject
Admissions tutors at the University of Birmingham are looking out for something you’ve done, or something you think, that conveys your commitment to the subject:
- What topics do you find particularly intriguing?
- Have you done anything interesting or unusual that has involved engaging with the subject beyond the syllabus, or through your extracurricular interests or voluntary work?
- Have you been on an interesting field course or visited a university laboratory and learned something from it?
A paragraph where you explain what you gained from one or two interests or activities like these would be very effective. Remember to explain things in your own words, ensure it has a good structure, and steer clear of poor grammar and spelling.
Cardiff University’s selectors are no different. They want you to demonstrate a commitment, motivation, and determination to further your knowledge in biosciences, along with any experience or other non-academic interests that highlight your personal qualities in general. They also want to see from your statement that you can communicate this in a way that’s concise and coherent.
See our in-depth guide to studying biological sciences for some inspiration.
Conveying your enthusiasm
Dr Devlin also told us all their applicants are invited for interview and 'the personal statement is the basis of that interview'. So he recommends that you write about things you would like them to ask you about.
So if you're fascinated by the machinery of the cell, human health or disease, the natural environment, any other specific aspects of biology, or just the science of living organisms in general, then make sure you include it. By reflecting on one or two of these interests in your statement, you’re likely to make a strong impression.
It’s good to include some non-academic content
Admissions tutors at King’s College London like to see an element in your statement that reflects on your general reading, debating, contributing to school, college or community life, or any cultural or sporting interests, as they are keen for you to continue this at uni and to contribute to the 'vitality of the College community'.
However, if your home or personal circumstances mean it has been difficult to extend your knowledge or experiences outside of school or college, don’t worry. As Cardiff points out, universities will usually be sympathetic to this.
How critical is the personal statement?
If you achieve the required grades and can genuinely demonstrate that you’ve got the necessary enthusiasm and commitment, then you should be in a strong position. Your personal statement, in combination with your academic reference, will be very important for demonstrating those qualities.
If your statement clearly shows you have also applied for a clinical programme like medicine, veterinary science or dentistry, that lack of commitment to biology is likely to be a turn-off to some universities, including University of Bristol. However, others take a different view on that, or may consider a separate statement sent directly to them. Do research this in advance!
According to University of Southampton, it’s if you don’t quite get the grades you need that the personal statement becomes especially critical. If you find yourself in this position, then your statement could turn out to be your lifeline on results day. As Dr East put it: 'If we have a few places left, then the statement will probably determine whether you’re in or out'.
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Two years ago, when an expert from the French National Centre for Scientific Research gave us a presentation of her works in molecular biology during our optional class of Scientific Exploration, it struck me that whilst planets, galaxies and space exert a profound fascination for most people, we can explore an equally complex universe through the lens of a microscope. We have so much to learn from cells, DNA and genes, no need to look so far away into larger notions that are literally beyond our full comprehension. Since we started studying in depth the general theme of biological sciences in class, I cannot see which other subject could fascinate me to the point of being ready to spend at least the next five years of my life studying it, especially the notions linked to genetics. Understanding how little fragments of acid combine to make a human being happen is incredible, and the lessons based on a mixture of documents, software and observation to infer about how events such as the synthesis of proteins or the transmission of a specific gene happen are especially stimulating. The only aspect of these lessons I dislike is my teacher always starting to explain some complex aspect of the topic then interrupting himself because "it's not on the syllabus", and it is by furthering my studies in this domain that I plan to satisfy my unanswered curiosity.
Reading through Eberhard Passarge's "Colour Atlas of Genetics" has already offered me some deeper knowledge of more complex genetic subjects, principally the transition from a gene to a protein. Discovering that this process which seemed so simple was divided into three precise steps (transcription, splicing and translation) in eukaryotic cells sparked my interest. Furthermore, the absence of splicing in prokaryotic cells surprised me since we do not refer to these cells in our lessons, I ignored the possible differences between the genetic mechanisms of eukaryotic and prokaryotic cells. Understanding that this difference was explained by the absence of introns in the latter's genes led to more interrogations which I have yet not been able to answer. I hope in a few years to be able to answer all the questions I ask myself by becoming a researcher specialised in genetics, or to use the use the knowledge I will have acquired to contribute to forensic investigations.
Apart from genetics, the main interests I have in biological sciences are the organisation and structure of cells, as well as the actions they are able to undertake. These subjects are actually all linked together, since the genes code the proteins which in turn affect a particular function of the cell, the latter then able to play a specific role in the organism. The fact that our body integrates this complex internal micrometric structure which dictates its conduct is just plainly fascinating. Studying genetics can therefore give me a better comprehension of cellular biology and vice-versa, my two main interests hence closely related in their learning.
My two main extra scholar hobbies are badminton and cinema. I've been practicing the former for a few years now, and find it especially helpful to clear my head from the pressure of exams whilst having a good time with friends every week and staying healthy. The latter is a more recent interest which I undertake when time is available to open my mind to different concepts, or simply to occasionally take a break from reality during an hour and a half.
The desire for understanding is my first, strongest motivation to enrol myself in a course related to genetics. I truly believe university will offer me the knowledge I seek in this topic especially, and complete it with other information relevant to the theme of biological sciences.
Please note UCAS will detect any form of plagiarism. PSE and its contributors do not take any responsibility for the way in which personal statements are used.
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Biology/natural sciences personal statement example.
I do not have to look far to find the source of my love of science. Just glancing around my living room my eyes fall upon a whole host of fascinating different organisms, seen and unseen they create a brilliant miniature ecosystem with billions of tiny processes and reactions for me to sit and unpick.
The direction of my interest in how the world functions has definitely changed and augmented over the years, but within the last few years it has been humans and higher organisms that have captured me most.
When learning about natural selection in A-level Biology I began to realise that understanding survival of the fittest could be the key to the explanation of why every living organism functions and behaves the way it does. I read Darwin’s ‘On the Origin of Species: By Means of Natural Selection’ and ever since have found myself relating everything I observe in the world back to natural selection.
There are however limits and boundaries; the challenges of pinning down the behaviour of higher organisms and humans to biological processes, and then to genes, and then to survival of the fittest enthrals me and is where my passion lies.
Studying both chemistry and biology at A-Level I am constantly making links between the two. I now feel that they cannot be separated if I am truly going to understand the human body. My desire to understand the chemical basis of behaviour has leaded me towards the field of neuroscience.
The work of Rebecca Saxe on how we think about other people’s thoughts has deeply influenced me. After watching online lectures by her and reading ‘Words, Thoughts and Theories’ by Alison Gopnick; I am committed to spending a career in learning and researching about the brain and the cognitive processes that are key to understanding consciousness.
To further my knowledge of life and its origins I have completed an Open University module called ‘Human Genetics and Health Issues’. Not only did I gain fascinating knowledge on modern genetics, I also learnt to discipline myself and manage my time more effectively.
This was a useful skill to further develop as I am constantly juggling college, extracurricular studies, part-time work as a waitress, hobbies and a social life which has been a formidable challenge.
My curious nature has lead to my own small research projects. This year I entered one of my projects for the Google International Science Fair and my submission was chosen to be the only UK semi-finalist.
The project explored the topic of whether it is possible to use our sense of taste as a means to find a reproductive mate that is genetically compatible.
Articles about my work were featured in the Guardian by journalist and ecologist Grrl Scientist and a number of other science blogs. I cannot explain the joy at the fact that one of my studies was recognised by a respected scientist.
The experience not only taught me far better experimental technique and interpretation of data, but it assured me that I want to spend my life researching and learning more about the science of humans.
I am a dedicated musician and love to compose my own music; I recently re-scored a short film which was shown at Shambala Festival. I have played the piano and sung for 10 years achieving up to grade 5 in piano so far.
My ability to speak publically improved and my skills in reasoning and analysis of argument were enhanced when my debate team won the Iain Duncan Smith debate competition at the House of Commons this year.
The idea of being in an environment where people aren’t afraid to ask questions and find the answers for themselves is tremendously appealing to me. I am really looking forward to beginning my undergraduate degree not just because it’s a stepping stone for a research career but because I love to learn.
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This personal statement was written by mmm_citrus for application in 2012.
mmm_citrus's university choices Cambridge University University College London University of Bristol University of Sussex The University of York
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I'm using this to apply for cambridge so I hope its okay :S
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Sat, 03/12/2011 - 04:14
Wow, this PS makes me feel small and inadequate lol. I hope to study neuroscience at Bristol, but I haven't done anything like compose music, or completing open university courses. Gosh, you are amazing :(
impressive acheivements, but
Wed, 07/11/2012 - 15:08
impressive acheivements, but I don't think the flowery (and frankly cheesy) language is really justified
Good work lol..... Scientific
Sat, 24/08/2013 - 17:21
Good work lol..... Scientific community need people like you; people like us.
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Biology Personal Statement Examples: Crafting a Winning UCAS Application
Dirghayu Kaushik
Are you a prospective undergraduate student with a passion for biology, looking to create a compelling personal statement for your UCAS application? Crafting a biology personal statement that stands out is crucial in securing a spot at your desired university.
In this comprehensive guide, we’ll provide you with biology personal statement examples and valuable advice to help you succeed in your application process.
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- What is a Personal Statement?
Defining the Personal Statement
A personal statement is a crucial component of your UCAS (Universities and Colleges Admissions Service) application, giving you the opportunity to showcase your passion, skills, and suitability for your chosen course. It’s your chance to make a lasting impression on admissions tutors.
The Importance of the Personal Statement
Admissions tutors receive numerous applications, making the personal statement a vital tool for differentiating yourself from other candidates. It allows you to provide insights into your character, motivation, and suitability for the biology program you aspire to join.
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- Biology Personal Statement Examples
Example 1: Expressing Passion
“Ever since I attended a biology field course in primary school, my love for biology has always captivated me. I am always intrigued by the microscopic world, from unraveling the secrets of DNA transcription to exploring the intricate processes of photosynthesis.”
In this example, the candidate expresses their lifelong fascination with biology, dating back to their primary school years. Their enthusiasm for delving into microscopic phenomena highlights their passion for the subject.
Example 2: Highlighting Relevant Experience
“Through volunteering and work experience, I’ve developed my ability to work as part of a team. My time management and leadership skills were honed while studying biomedical science, and I’m excited to apply them to my degree in biology.”
This example emphasizes the candidate’s practical experience and transferable skills gained through volunteering and work experience. It showcases their readiness to excel in a biology program.
Example 3: Going Beyond the Syllabus
“My A-level studies have fueled my thirst for knowledge. While the syllabus is essential, I’ve always been keen to explore topics beyond it, such as medical microbiology, viruses, and bacteria. I want to pursue exactly cutting-edge research in my undergraduate studies.”
In this example, the applicant demonstrates their academic curiosity and ambition by highlighting their willingness to explore topics beyond the standard curriculum. Their desire to engage in cutting-edge research aligns with the university’s emphasis on innovation.
Example 4: Showcasing Academic Dedication
“My dedication to biology and chemistry is evident in my essay writing and analytical skills. I’ve enjoyed studying biochemical components of life and analyzing complex biological processes.”
This example showcases the candidate’s academic commitment and analytical abilities, providing evidence of their preparedness for rigorous academic coursework in biology.
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- Additional Considerations for Your Biology Personal Statement
The Role of Extracurricular Activities
Your extracurricular activities can play a significant role in strengthening your personal statement. While not every hobby or activity needs to be mentioned, those that demonstrate your commitment, leadership, or skills relevant to biology can be highlighted.
Consider discussing participation in biology-related clubs or societies, science competitions, or relevant volunteer work. These experiences can illustrate your dedication to the field and provide evidence of your suitability for a biology program.
Demonstrating a Holistic Interest in Biology
Admissions tutors appreciate candidates who display a holistic interest in biology. This means going beyond the classroom and textbooks to explore the subject independently. Mention books, documentaries, online courses, or conferences that have expanded your understanding of biology.
Discuss any personal projects, experiments, or research you’ve conducted outside of your academic curriculum. Highlight how these experiences have deepened your knowledge and passion for the subject.
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Before diving into your personal statement, it’s essential to have a solid grasp of the UCAS application process. Familiarize yourself with UCAS deadlines, course codes, and entry requirements for your chosen biology programs. Research the universities you plan to apply to thoroughly, considering their course structures, facilities, and faculty expertise.
Tailoring Your Statement to Each University
While your personal statement serves as a general document, it’s advisable to tailor it slightly for each university you apply to. Highlight specific aspects of each program that align with your interests and goals. Mention any unique research opportunities or facilities that attract you to that particular institution.
Seek Guidance from Teachers and Advisors
Don’t underestimate the value of input from teachers, school advisors, or mentors. They can provide valuable insights into crafting a strong personal statement and may be familiar with successful strategies that have worked for past students.
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Filling Out Your UCAS Application
The UCAS application itself requires careful attention. Ensure that you complete all sections accurately and honestly. This includes entering your academic qualifications, personal details, and course choices correctly. Any errors or inaccuracies could jeopardize your application.
Personal Statement Length and Structure
The UCAS personal statement has a character limit of 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text. This constraint necessitates concise and focused writing. To create a well-structured statement, consider the following format:
- Introduction: Begin with a compelling opening that grabs the reader’s attention. Introduce yourself and your passion for biology.
- Body: Discuss your academic journey, relevant experiences, extracurricular activities, and why you’re a suitable candidate for the program.
- Conclusion: Summarize your key points, reiterate your enthusiasm for biology, and explain why you’re excited to study it at the university of your choice.
- Top Universities for Biology
University of Oxford
Renowned for its academic excellence, the University of Oxford offers various biology-related programs, including Biological Sciences, Biochemistry, and Experimental Psychology. The university’s cutting-edge research facilities and distinguished faculty make it a top choice for aspiring biologists.
University of Cambridge
The University of Cambridge is another prestigious institution with a strong emphasis on biological sciences. Students can pursue degrees in Natural Sciences with a specialization in biology, providing a comprehensive foundation in the field.
Imperial College London
Imperial College London offers a wide range of biology-related programs, including Biotechnology, Biology, and Biomedical Sciences. Its central location in London provides students with access to numerous research opportunities and industry connections.
University of California, Berkeley
For those considering international options, the University of California, Berkeley, is renowned for its biology programs. With a strong focus on research and innovation, it’s an attractive destination for students interested in the biological sciences.
- Crafting Your Unique Biology Personal Statement
Tailoring Your Statement to Your Interests
Your personal statement should reflect your specific interests within biology. Whether it’s molecular biology, ecology, genetics, or any other subfield, make it clear why you’re passionate about that particular aspect of biology.
Conveying Your Long-Term Goals
Admissions tutors are interested in understanding your long-term aspirations. Discuss how a degree in biology will help you achieve your career goals, whether it’s conducting groundbreaking research, contributing to environmental conservation, or advancing healthcare.
Demonstrating Personal Growth
Reflect on your personal growth and development through your academic journey and experiences. Explain how challenges you’ve faced have strengthened your determination and ability to overcome obstacles.
Incorporating a Unique Narrative
Craft a narrative within your personal statement that engages the reader. Share anecdotes or personal stories that highlight your journey and connect with your passion for biology.
The Importance of Research
Show that you’ve researched the university and program you’re applying to. Mention specific courses, professors, or research projects that align with your interests. This demonstrates your genuine interest in the institution.
In conclusion, crafting a biology personal statement is a critical step in securing a spot at your desired university. By following the advice and examples provided in this guide, you can create a compelling and memorable personal statement that sets you apart from other applicants.
Remember to start early, seek feedback, and tailor your statement to each university’s unique offerings. With dedication and careful preparation, you can increase your chances of pursuing your passion for biology at a top university. Good luck with your UCAS application!
What should I include in my biology personal statement?
You should include your passion for biology, relevant experiences, academic dedication, and any unique qualities that make you a strong candidate.
How long should my personal statement be?
UCAS recommends a maximum of 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text, so keep it concise and focused.
Can I use biology personal statement examples as templates?
You can use them as inspiration, but make sure your statement is unique and reflects your personal experiences and goals.
Should I mention my extracurricular activities in my personal statement?
If they are relevant to biology or demonstrate skills that would benefit your studies, include them.
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Table of Contents
- • What is a Personal Statement?
- • Biology Personal Statement Examples
- • Additional Considerations for Your Biology Personal Statement
- • The UCAS Application Process
- • Top Universities for Biology
- • Crafting Your Unique Biology Personal Statement
- • Conclusion
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Written by Jennifer Bevan
This is an example personal statement for a Masters degree application in Biology. See our guide for advice on writing your own postgraduate personal statement .
Over the time I have been studying Biology the importance of the subject has been repeatedly highlighted to me. From the development of novel treatments for medical conditions to the optimisation of crop growth, biological research has saved and improved millions of lives. Thoroughly understanding Biology is essential to continue developing and improving our current methods and I hope to be involved in this process in a microbiological setting. Since learning about the increasing antibiotic resistance in common bacterial pathogens, my interests have primarily been in microbiology.
I have applied for your MSc course as I hope to gain more in-depth knowledge into the pathogenicity of bacteria and the classes of antibiotics currently in development. Your modules in medical microbiology, host-microbe interactions, and microbial physiology and virulence would be ideal for developing the specialist knowledge I desire. I was also drawn to this programme for the opportunity to work in a cutting-edge microbiology laboratory on a piece of extended independent research. During my undergraduate research I read numerous papers from your research groups and the opportunity to work with some of these academics would be invaluable.
Throughout my Bachelors degree in Biology, for which I achieved a first, I developed a range of skills that would be an excellent foundation for the content covered in this programme. I gained experience with statistical packages including GraphPad InStat and Prism, particularly during my final year project to analyse my data. Several of my modules included laboratory experience including cell culture, Gram staining and pouring agar plates. During this time, I kept a laboratory book and developed excellent record keeping, which will be important for the independent research in a Masters. For my final year project, I assessed the susceptibility of Staphylococcus aureus to a mixture of vinegar and honey, both of which are known to have antimicrobial activity alone. This project allowed me to develop a range of new microbiology skills, particularly using checkerboard assays and improving my aseptic technique. Upon completion of my degree, I was awarded the Royal Society of Biology top student award to recognise my achievements and the skills I had developed.
Following my graduation, I worked as a laboratory technician at a school during term time. In this role excellent time management is essential to allow sufficient time to prepare experiments for the students and tidy up before the next class. I am responsible for cleaning, safely storing and keeping a catalogue of the equipment and consumables in the storeroom so being well organised is crucial. Since beginning this role, I have further developed my ability to work as part of a team through liaising with teachers regarding timetables or experiment plans and by supporting them during practical work.
While I enjoyed being a laboratory technician, I hope to use the valuable laboratory experience I gained to achieve a Masters in Biology and ultimately pursue a career in microbiology research.
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How to Write a Biology Personal Statement Worthy of Oxbridge!
By U2 Tutor, Holly (Cambridge Biological Natural Sciences graduate and current Graduate Medic at St George’s Hospital Medical School)
Writing a personal statement can be overwhelming - there’s so much pressure to ‘sell yourself’ to the universities in just 4000 characters. In this blog we’ll discuss how to structure your personal statement, as well as tips to simplify the writing process and make your personal statement stand out.
How to Structure your Biology Personal Statement
Paragraph 1: This should be motivation focused i.e. why you want to do Biology above any other course.
Paragraph 2: This should demonstrate your aptitude for the course - explore what you have done so far and the skills you’ve gained from it, in order to show that you’re suited to university learning.
Paragraph 3: This should be a continuation of paragraph 2, ideally discussing some other areas of biology or other skills.
Paragraph 4: Brief discussion of extra-curriculars, but only if they also demonstrate skills which suit you to the course.
Writing the Perfect Biology Personal Statement Introduction
If you take anything from this guide, it’s to avoid clichés! The most important thing you can do is convey your genuine interest in the subject, and saying you’ve wanted to do biology since you were a child isn’t the way to do this (even if it is the case). Equally, try not to exaggerate with your wording, as this can also come across as less authentic. Just try and explain your motivations clearly and honestly, and focus on showing this motivation through your experiences and beyond syllabus knowledge.
Writing the opening sentence can be the hardest part, so is often best left until the end . There’s a misconception that you have to write a captivating, attention-grabbing opening sentence - this isn’t the case, especially not for the sciences! It’s completely fine to start simply, such as with ‘I was first drawn to Biology when I studied x…’ and go from there. Remember you have a character limit, so it’s best to just go straight in!
Forming a First Draft of Your Biology Personal Statement
Don’t put pressure on yourself to write a full draft on your first attempt. There will be lots of redrafting and restructuring and that’s okay! Give yourself plenty of time to allow for this.
The best way to start is to write down everything you want to include in your personal statement - include everything you can think of from an academic and extra-curricular perspective. Try not to include anything beyond the last few years, as this is unlikely to be relevant . For each point, determine what skills you gained from these experiences and what you learnt from them .
Then compare this to the skills/ qualities most sought after for the courses you’re applying to (this is likely to be very similar between universities). Whilst it can seem overwhelming at first, it’s a quick way of narrowing down what is worth including in your personal statement. From there you can work out how to elaborate on these experiences. Try to group them together in themes if possible, so that you can organise your paragraphs accordingly.
Ideas to Show Your Interest
You might be thinking that your list of things to include in your personal statement is going to be rather short - you hopefully have plenty of time to rectify that! If you’ve not yet had a chance, it’s important to explore Biology in more depth - this is to distinguish you from your classmates doing the same subjects. Remember the universities will also see your grades through UCAS, so you’re wasting some of the precious word count by mentioning these. Instead, you need to discuss co-curriculars - evidence that you’ve explored the subject and have a genuine interest. Try and find 2-3 broad areas of Biology that you’re interested in and ideally match with some of the modules offered as part of the courses you’re applying to . There are plenty of ways you can do this…
Books - these have been divided into some broad topics within some of the popular Biology courses:
Biomedical:
Do No Harm - Henry Marsh
Fragile Lives - Stephen Westaby
The Body: A Guide for Occupants - Bill Bryson
The Selfish Gene - Richard Dawkins,
The Epigenetics Revolution - Nessa Carey
Genome - Matt Ridley
Psychology:
Any of Oliver Sacks books, particularly The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat or Awakenings
The Psychopath Test - Jon Ronson
On the Origin of Species - Charles Darwin
Sapiens - Yuval Noah Harari
Epigenetics: The Wisdom of Whores - Elizabeth Pisani
Cognitive sciences: Daniel Kahneman - Thinking, Fast and Slow
Essay competitions
There are yearly competitions hosted by Minds Underground to allow you to explore topics you might not have encountered before.
Many Oxbridge colleges also run their own essay competitions , as well as biological societies e.g. Royal Society of Biology and British Society for Cell Biology . Essay competitions are particularly relevant to Oxbridge applications as supervisions often require you to write similar essays.
Biology Work Experience
It can be useful to get work experience, such as in a lab, but don’t feel like this is an essential - universities understand it can be very difficult to find, especially in the post-covid era. If you do have experience, be careful not to just list what you did during work experience. Focus on the skills you gained, and how you could use these at university e.g. familiarity with different lab-based techniques.
Research Projects (Minds Underground)
Similar to Extended Projects offered by some schools, you could write your own research project exploring a topic of your choice. It can be difficult to decide on a title - it might be easier to use your A-level content as a springboard, and design a project to investigate something you’ve learnt about. For example, you could design a literature review to analyse existing research on a topic, in order to identify gaps in current research and inform future research opportunities. You could also design your own experiment (although there obviously limits to this!) such as investigating conditions needed by different plants.
Minds Underground can guide you through this with a Biology expert… https://www.mindsunderground.com/work-research-experience
Biology Summer School (Minds Underground)
Summer schools can be an exciting way to get a taster of a variety of different university level biology subjects, from genetic engineering and cancer therapies to ecology and behaviour. Minds Underground hosts an amazing Biology summer school run by Oxbridge graduates, allowing you to broaden your knowledge of Biology whilst gaining useful personal statement and interview material.
Talks and podcasts
Online lectures can also give you a taste of university courses - these are widely available from universities and sites such as Ted Talks . Podcasts are increasingly popular, and are an easy way to keep up to date with current development in Biology. We recommend The Infinite Monkey Cage (less Biology specific, but very interesting!) and Radiolab .
Extra-curriculars
In the past there’s been a focus on the ‘all rounder’: someone who is academic, musical and sporty. This is not really the case any more, and so extracurriculars shouldn’t take up a significant proportion of your personal statement. The purpose of mentioning these should be to show what skills you’ve gained, and how you could apply these to your course or university life. For example, your weekly football match could have helped develop your team working skills and communication skills, something which is essential in a lab environment. Equally, it could allow you to switch off for a few hours and maintain your high work ethic - this is just as important, as universities (particularly high achieving ones) increasingly want to see that you can maintain a work-life balance.
Applying to Oxford for Biology? Here’s What You Should Also Do
To craft a standout personal statement for Oxford Biological Sciences specifically, it can be helpful to gear your personal statement to specific qualities and details that the university values. Here are some tips to enhance your Biology personal statement with an application for Oxford in mind:
1. Demonstrate Academic Rigour:
Highlight your passion for biology through academic achievements, relevant coursework, and independent research.
Discuss specific topics or scientific concepts that have captivated your interest and showcase your understanding of advanced material. You could have a look through the 1st year Oxford Biology modules and see if anything you have explored links to material you may cover at the university.
2. Emphasise Independent Thinking:
Discuss instances where you've independently pursued scientific inquiry or engaged in co-curricular activities related to biology.
Oxford values students who can think critically and contribute to discussions, so emphasise your ability to approach problems independently.
3. Reflect on Your Reading:
As detailed above, mention books, articles, or research papers that have influenced your understanding of biology. However, don’t just list them - make sure you give your independent analysis and opinion on everything you have included in your personal statement.
Oxford is known for its tutorial system, and demonstrating that you've engaged with challenging material beyond the standard curriculum can set you apart.
4. Discuss Your Practical Skills:
Describe any laboratory work, experiments, or field studies you've been involved in.
Showcasing hands-on experience is crucial, as it aligns with Oxford's emphasis on practical learning.
5. Showcase Interdisciplinary Interests:
Oxford appreciates interdisciplinary approaches. If your interest in biology connects with other disciplines, explain how and why.
Mention any relevant projects or coursework that spans multiple scientific domains.
6. Make It Personal and Reflective:
Share personal anecdotes or experiences that sparked your interest in biology.
Reflect on how your unique background or experiences contribute to your perspective as a future biologist.
7. Highlight Critical Thinking and Problem-Solving:
Illustrate instances where you've had to think critically, solve problems, or overcome challenges.
Oxford seeks students who can navigate complex issues and contribute meaningfully to academic discussions.
8. Address Your Motivation for Oxford:
Clearly articulate why you want to study biology at Oxford specifically, without mentioning the university explicitly as the personal statement also needs to be relevant to your other university choices.
Discuss the aspects of the Oxford programme (again, without mentioning the university explicitly) that appeal to you and how it aligns with your long-term goals.
9. Prepare for Interview Discussion:
Anticipate questions that might arise from your personal statement and be ready to discuss your ideas in-depth.
Consider how your experiences and perspectives can contribute to academic discussions at Oxford.
A standout personal statement for Oxford is not just a list of achievements but a narrative that demonstrates intellectual curiosity, a passion for biology, and the potential to thrive in Oxford's academic environment. View the personal statement as a springboard for engaging discussions during interviews!
Biological Science Personal Statement Example
Siddhartha Mukherjee's "The Gene: An Intimate History" ignited a profound curiosity in the intricate tapestry of genetic inheritance and molecular mechanisms. Mukherjee's narrative skilfully brought to life the historical context and societal impact of genetics, serving as a catalyst that fuelled my exploration into the foundational works of molecular biology. Inspired by Mukherjee's narrative, I expanded my exploration of genetics through literature, delving into Carl Zimmer's "She Has Her Mother's Laugh." This broadened my perspective on the broader implications of genetic inheritance, touching on topics from heredity and evolution to the societal impact of genetic discoveries. Zimmer's adept blend of scientific rigour and accessible storytelling not only deepened my understanding of genetics but also prompted me to critically analyse the ethical implications of manipulating genetic information, shaping my conviction to approach the rapidly advancing field of genetics with a thoughtful consideration of its societal ramifications. In delving into Watson and Crick's seminal paper on the structure of DNA, I also found myself captivated by the meticulous unravelling of the double helix. This exploration propelled me beyond textbook learning into an understanding of the molecular foundations that govern life. This foundational knowledge took on practical significance as I engaged in a genetic engineering project that utilised CRISPR-Cas9 technology to manipulate bacterial DNA. . This hands-on experience not only solidified my laboratory skills but also deepened my appreciation for the practical implications of gene editing, fueling my commitment to ethical scientific practices. I learn about the delicate balance between scientific innovation and responsible ethical practices, shaping my perspective on the potential impacts of cutting-edge technologies in the biological sciences. This awareness was further honed during a summer school class dedicated to the revolutionary CRISPR technology. Here, I explored the nuances of gene editing's potential applications, ethical implications, and the ongoing discourse in the scientific community. This exploration sparked a particular interest in the potential application of CRISPR technology for targeted gene therapy, a revolutionary avenue with transformative implications for treating genetic disorders at the molecular level. This newfound fascination with gene therapy, particularly in the context of CRISPR technology, has propelled my desire to contribute to the evolving landscape of biomedical research and therapeutic interventions, further solidifying my commitment to exploring the intersection of cutting-edge science and ethical considerations. My interest in biology extended beyond the microscopic realm into the intricate interplay of species within ecological systems. I recently watched an online lecture on ecosystem dynamics and biodiversity, which delved into the relationships that shape ecosystems. This exploration found resonance in a podcast episode titled "Ecology in Action," where real-world ecological projects illuminated the practical applications of ecological principles I had studied. I am particularly interested in the study of symbiotic relationships in ecosystems, exploring how mutualistic interactions between species contribute to the resilience and sustainability of ecological communities—a concept that I find particularly fascinating for its broader implications in conservation biology and ecosystem management. Each aspect of my exploration into the world of biology has added a layer to my understanding, creating a solid foundation for further academic pursuits and a future dedicated to advancing the frontiers of biological knowledge.
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Human Biology Personal Statement Examples
Human Biology Personal Statement Example
My fascination with other species has grown since taking Biology A1. It has made me want to know more about the anatomy and physiology of mammals, their defence and immune systems, and their survival abilities. For example, the way the African lion can withstand the effects of a poisonous snake bite.
Ethics and Philosophy has allowed me to achieve a high degree of analytical and critical thinking skills, which have increased my ability to think logically when applying these skills to different situations. It has also improved my understanding of scientific theories, such as evolutionary biology and natural selection.
My favourite part of the course was the Physiological Systems module. I found it interesting to learn how our bodies functioned and evolved over the years. I’ve always been fascinated by biology and evolution, so I thought it would be fun to learn more about them.
I thoroughly enjoyed biology during my AS year and even more during my A2 year with an emphasis on physiology. My favourite topic was the nervous systems of various species and how they functioned differently depending on the environment they were living in. For example, the earthworms had giant axon neurons, which sped up the transmission of the electrical signal, allowing them to move quickly through the soil.
Another exciting aspect of biology was how different animal groups related to each other within ecosystems and how these ecosystems differed. An example of this would be the niche that certain species occupy within an environment and how an imbalance of species could affect the whole environment. Finally, I found the subject of ecology very intriguing, especially how changes in the environment affected the balance of life within an environment.
During these activities, I’ve learned persevering skills, which have made me better at school. I’ve also developed good sportsmanship, which has given me the courage to volunteer for things outside of school. All of these experiences have contributed to making me a well-rounded person.
My current job involves working in a veterinary clinic. This has been very useful because it allows me to get close to the animal world. I have achieved the Bronze Award in the Duke of Edinburgh scheme and am currently completing the Silver Award. This scheme focuses heavily on personal development and helps people achieve goals they may not have thought possible. It teaches them how to manage their time effectively and encourages them to take responsibility for themselves. It also allows them to develop new skills, such as first aid and leadership. The Duke of Edinburgh scheme is an outstanding achievement and shows that I can be responsible for myself.
At my previous school, I received the Charles Braye Memorial Award for Excellence in Character, which cites ‘being the best you can at no one else’s expense’ for my attitude to work and school relationships. I also had the privilege of going to Africa and experiencing what it was like to live in a rural village without electricity and lacking essential resources such as clean drinking water. Such experiences have been the most memorable ones for me; I gained a relatively rare experience outside my comfort zone and everyday lifestyle. I also learnt to appreciate what I had and not to take it for granted.
As for the university, I’m looking forward to it because I think these courses are especially suited to me since they focus on my interests; I’m enthusiastic about them, and I feel that my current subjects could help me prepare for studying them.
Thank you for this opportunity, and I hope my human biology personal statement will be kindly considered in your admission process.
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One of my earliest and most vivid memories is of the first exhibition I visited, aged 5. I stared upwards, transfixed, as before my eyes stood a cadaver, plastinated and sliced into a dozen wafer-thin pieces. From head to toe, I studied its morbid, technicolour flesh and was overwhelmed by emotions of awe and dread. Visiting the Body Worlds exhibition seeded my enthusiasm for biology and a desire to ever expand upon my understanding of our existence, the human body and its meticulous design.
My dedication to studying science can be seen by my A Level subject choices. Biology and chemistry provided me with an advanced understanding of the human body at every level, from essential intracellular reactions to the integrated function of body systems. Studying statistics has taught me practical, transferrable skills such as the use of complex reasoning and data manipulation, while nurturing my natural aptitude for mathematics. I work in the Intensive Care Unit of (my local) Hospital as part of a life saving interprofessional team, protecting the health and dignity of our patients, most of whom have Multiple Organ Dysfunction Syndrome. My experiences to date have opened my eyes to the importance of medical research into the treatment of terminally ill patients and allowed me a unique insight into the capability and efficiency of our bodies in a state of health compared with ill health.
Alongside my studies, I achieved the Bronze Duke of Edinburgh Award, showing my endurance, forethought and sense of adventure. I also completed the Extended Project Qualification, gaining key time management, critical thinking and IT skills; it was a truly invaluable experience, not least of all, for teaching me the vital importance of organisation and self-discipline. Outside of my education and employment I have undertaken numerous endeavours that have enriched me as a person. I volunteer at Winter Comfort, a charity supporting the homeless people of Cambridge. I am a mentor to current and ex-service users, passing on essential skills for employment and inspiring unto them the confidence to succeed. Other positions of responsibility and trust I have achieved range from representing my school as a prefect and peer tutor, to single-handedly managing a children’s toyshop in my previous job.
My creativity and imagination is a huge part of who I am. I have a great love of the arts and especially enjoy singing; I have performed leading roles in a number of theatrical shows and sold several pieces of artwork from a young age. Furthermore, I am part of the Young, Gifted & Talented Programme for my distinctive talent in art and similarly, for my creative writing, in English. I like to surround myself with friends and spend a lot of my time participating in educational groups and societies, as well as overseeing children’s sports clubs such as dance classes and horse riding for the disabled. A strong belief of mine is in the equality of all people. As a member of multiple human rights organisations I campaign for the abolition of discrimination against ethnicity, gender, sexual orientation, age and disability, with the aim of education and tolerance on a global scale.
There is nothing more complex or, in my opinion, more beautiful than the human body, in its form and function. Having the opportunity to study the foundation of all human life would greatly expand my ambition and capacity to pursue a career in the area of medical science. I look forward to demonstrating my competence, resilience and commitment throughout my time at University, while being a part of such a universally significant, continuously developing subject.
Universities Applied to:
- King's College London (Anatomy, Developmental and Human Biology) - Offer (AAB) Firm
- Leicester (Medical Physiology) - Offer (Unconditional) Insurance
- Leeds (Human Physiology) - Offer (AAA) Declined
- Manchester (Anatomical Sciences) - Offer (AAB) Declined
- Liverpool (Anatomy and Human Biology) - Offer (Unconditional) Declined
Grades Achieved:
- Statistics (A2) - A
- Chemistry (A2) - B (Resitting Unit 5 exam)
- Biology (A2) - B (Resitting Unit 1 & 2 exams)
- Psychology (AS) - C
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Successful Personal Statement For Natural Sciences (Biological) At Cambridge
Last Updated: 27th July 2020
Author: Adi Sen
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Welcome to our popular Personal Statement series where we present a successful Personal Statement, and our Oxbridge Tutors provide their feedback on it.
Today, we are looking through a Biological Natural Sciences applicant’s Personal Statement that helped secure a place at Cambridge University. The Natural Sciences Course at Cambridge offers a wide range of physical and biological science subjects from 16 departments in a unique and demanding course.
Read on to see how this candidate wrote a Personal Statement that navigates the wide range of biological science subjects.
Here’s a breakdown of the Personal Statement:
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Biological Natural Sciences Personal Statement
When Theodore Roszak wrote that nature composes some of her loveliest poems for the microscope and the telescope, I feel he captures the way that science gives us greater understanding of the world in which we live. With this understanding come opportunities to influence the lives we lead. It is my strong interest in science coupled with my inquisitive nature, thirst for knowledge and analytical thinking that compels me to read Natural Sciences. I aspire to work with others at the forefront of scientific knowledge to see how we can apply this knowledge to meet the challenges that unfold in the twenty-first century.
My A level studies have confirmed my interest in a range of scientific areas. After studying cell organelles in biology, I was captivated by reading ‘Power, Sex, Suicide: Mitochondria and the Meaning of Life’ by Nick Lane, delving deeper into the role of mitochondria in cellular function. Continuing to explore beyond the syllabus, reading ‘Genome’ by Matt Ridley and ‘H2O a Biography of Water’ by Philip Ball has fuelled my interest in other areas such as genetics and molecular biology. My enthusiasm for biology was recognised by being awarded the school Year 12 biology prize. In chemistry, exploring carbon nanotubes was exhilarating as I could see that they have enormous potential in diverse applications such as carrying drugs into specific body cells. It was during work experience at a local hospital I saw that scientists provide the tools for doctors and the significance of research in developing new, improved treatments. To explore further the application of science in different contexts, I attended ‘Chemistry in Action’ lectures at the Institute of Education, London.
I was inspired by speaking with scientists at the forefront of research whilst attending the Summer Science Exhibition at the Royal Society. Intrigued by the development of a nanocell to store clean energy using sunlight and that the cell contained porphyrin which is involved in photosynthesis, I realised that studying the structure and function of plants may provide vital information in developing new ways of storing energy. Keen to experiment, it was exciting to make and identify graphene, the first two dimensional atomic material and to explore the potential uses of this strong, transparent and highly conductive material. It is enthralling to consider how these current scientific developments may be applied in the future. Finding great satisfaction in problem solving and thriving on challenge, I have enjoyed studying mathematics, particularly learning new concepts such as calculus. My study of history has enhanced my analytical and essay writing skills. Moreover, it has given me a perspective on the relationship between science and society over the years.
Balancing my extra-curricular activities with my studies has required good time-management. I enjoy playing the piano and a range of sports including netball, tennis and skiing. Playing in the school netball team for the past six years has shown me the value of good teamwork. I have enjoyed volunteering weekly at Strathmore School for children with disabilities and successfully sought permission to organise an Easter Party for them which required initiative, creativity and management skills. Volunteering on the Whitgift Special Needs Activity Project has enhanced my communication and leadership skills and has made me aware of the challenges faced by those with disabilities and their families.
I believe that I have the skills, scientific curiosity and motivation required to learn from, and contribute to, this diverse and challenging course. Studying Natural Sciences will give me the flexibility to explore a wide range of scientific areas and will enable me to develop the skills to work with colleagues at the cutting edge of science.
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Good Points Of The Personal Statement
Very well-written with a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion. This statement begins by setting the scene as to why Natural Science, and in particular, Biology, is important to both the world and the applicant. The student clearly explains their interest in Biology and then goes on to explain their interest in the other subjects covered as part of the Natural Sciences degree. Many prospective students forget to do this, and in this statement, every point is justified with examples from the student’s personal experiences which adds emphasis to the statement.
Bad Points Of The Personal Statement
At times this reads a bit like a list, and removing a few examples so that they could say more about those left would have produced a more impactful statement which would more adequately fulfil the requirements to show interest, ability, familiarity, ambition, and understanding of the course’s demands.
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This is an excellent personal statement with a clear and logical structure. The student does not simply list their achievements but provides reasons for their academic interests.
We’re giving this one 5/5 as it’s clearly a strong statement that made an impact on the admissions tutors reading it.
And there we have it – a Cambridge Natural Sciences Personal Statement with feedback from our expert tutors.
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